This is my daughter's character for a manga she's trying to write. She's only 11.
Pretty cute.Pics from my kids
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I can't draw worth a flip, but my kids are quite the artists. I hope you don't mind looking over their drawings. My daughter works with prismacolors more these days, but my son prefers the sketches.
This is my daughter's character for a manga she's trying to write. She's only 11. Pretty cute.
This is my daughter's character for a manga she's trying to write. She's only 11.
Pretty cute.You do not have the required permissions to view the files attached to this post.
[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE
You see into the deepest part of me ---
beyond the fog I hide behind.
You cast your light upon the shadows
that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.
You ease the pain when I am hurting,
and morbid visions from my past
pierce into the realm of Reason
as though I danced on blades of glass.
You grant me strength when I have fallen
and, once again, I've lost my way.
You take my hand in Yours and lead me
into the promise of a brand new day.
You bring order to all my chaos,
yet set my well-laid plans awry.
You place me on a firm foundation ---
then give me wings so I can fly.
You sand away my roughened edges
and polish all the dullest parts
until I stand before Your presence...
a newly-sculpted work of art.
You see into the heart within me,
right through my motives and selfish will.
And yet, in spite of all You see
You say You love me even still.
~by D.M.~
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true_noir_chloe - Posts: 3091
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This is my son's drawing. He's 13 and very talented, I think. 
You do not have the required permissions to view the files attached to this post.
[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE
You see into the deepest part of me ---
beyond the fog I hide behind.
You cast your light upon the shadows
that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.
You ease the pain when I am hurting,
and morbid visions from my past
pierce into the realm of Reason
as though I danced on blades of glass.
You grant me strength when I have fallen
and, once again, I've lost my way.
You take my hand in Yours and lead me
into the promise of a brand new day.
You bring order to all my chaos,
yet set my well-laid plans awry.
You place me on a firm foundation ---
then give me wings so I can fly.
You sand away my roughened edges
and polish all the dullest parts
until I stand before Your presence...
a newly-sculpted work of art.
You see into the heart within me,
right through my motives and selfish will.
And yet, in spite of all You see
You say You love me even still.
~by D.M.~
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true_noir_chloe - Posts: 3091
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Hey, that's cool, another aspiring Christian manga artist! We can always use more of those! Would you tell your daughter that she's doing a lovely job so far and to keep it up?
BOOSTER: Hey, No.1! Where's my cake?!
SNIFIT 1: Booster, Sir! There's a 70% chance the object you're standing on is a cake.
BOOSTER: What? THIS thing's a cake?
You have the power to say anything you want, so why not say something positive?
- Frank Capra
(in response to an interview question "Do you have a pet peeve having to do with this biz?")
People who write below their abilities in order to crank out tons of books and make a buck. Especially Christian authors who do that. Outsiders judge us for it, and make fun of us for it, and it makes Jesus look bad. We of all artists on earth should be the most concerned with doing our best possible work at all times. We of all people should write with all our hearts, as if writing for the Lord and not for men.
- Athol Dickson
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inkhana - Posts: 3670
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I'll place one more drawing from my daughter.
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[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE
You see into the deepest part of me ---
beyond the fog I hide behind.
You cast your light upon the shadows
that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.
You ease the pain when I am hurting,
and morbid visions from my past
pierce into the realm of Reason
as though I danced on blades of glass.
You grant me strength when I have fallen
and, once again, I've lost my way.
You take my hand in Yours and lead me
into the promise of a brand new day.
You bring order to all my chaos,
yet set my well-laid plans awry.
You place me on a firm foundation ---
then give me wings so I can fly.
You sand away my roughened edges
and polish all the dullest parts
until I stand before Your presence...
a newly-sculpted work of art.
You see into the heart within me,
right through my motives and selfish will.
And yet, in spite of all You see
You say You love me even still.
~by D.M.~
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true_noir_chloe - Posts: 3091
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And then here's another from my son. 
I think he did great with the eyes.
I think he did great with the eyes.You do not have the required permissions to view the files attached to this post.
[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE
You see into the deepest part of me ---
beyond the fog I hide behind.
You cast your light upon the shadows
that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.
You ease the pain when I am hurting,
and morbid visions from my past
pierce into the realm of Reason
as though I danced on blades of glass.
You grant me strength when I have fallen
and, once again, I've lost my way.
You take my hand in Yours and lead me
into the promise of a brand new day.
You bring order to all my chaos,
yet set my well-laid plans awry.
You place me on a firm foundation ---
then give me wings so I can fly.
You sand away my roughened edges
and polish all the dullest parts
until I stand before Your presence...
a newly-sculpted work of art.
You see into the heart within me,
right through my motives and selfish will.
And yet, in spite of all You see
You say You love me even still.
~by D.M.~
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true_noir_chloe - Posts: 3091
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Thanks Ink, I will.
[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE
You see into the deepest part of me ---
beyond the fog I hide behind.
You cast your light upon the shadows
that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.
You ease the pain when I am hurting,
and morbid visions from my past
pierce into the realm of Reason
as though I danced on blades of glass.
You grant me strength when I have fallen
and, once again, I've lost my way.
You take my hand in Yours and lead me
into the promise of a brand new day.
You bring order to all my chaos,
yet set my well-laid plans awry.
You place me on a firm foundation ---
then give me wings so I can fly.
You sand away my roughened edges
and polish all the dullest parts
until I stand before Your presence...
a newly-sculpted work of art.
You see into the heart within me,
right through my motives and selfish will.
And yet, in spite of all You see
You say You love me even still.
~by D.M.~
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true_noir_chloe - Posts: 3091
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Oh yes, that last one of your son's is very good too! ^^ Cool!
BOOSTER: Hey, No.1! Where's my cake?!
SNIFIT 1: Booster, Sir! There's a 70% chance the object you're standing on is a cake.
BOOSTER: What? THIS thing's a cake?
You have the power to say anything you want, so why not say something positive?
- Frank Capra
(in response to an interview question "Do you have a pet peeve having to do with this biz?")
People who write below their abilities in order to crank out tons of books and make a buck. Especially Christian authors who do that. Outsiders judge us for it, and make fun of us for it, and it makes Jesus look bad. We of all artists on earth should be the most concerned with doing our best possible work at all times. We of all people should write with all our hearts, as if writing for the Lord and not for men.
- Athol Dickson
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inkhana - Posts: 3670
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Thanks Sangoku and Ink, I'll tell my kids.^-^
[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE
You see into the deepest part of me ---
beyond the fog I hide behind.
You cast your light upon the shadows
that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.
You ease the pain when I am hurting,
and morbid visions from my past
pierce into the realm of Reason
as though I danced on blades of glass.
You grant me strength when I have fallen
and, once again, I've lost my way.
You take my hand in Yours and lead me
into the promise of a brand new day.
You bring order to all my chaos,
yet set my well-laid plans awry.
You place me on a firm foundation ---
then give me wings so I can fly.
You sand away my roughened edges
and polish all the dullest parts
until I stand before Your presence...
a newly-sculpted work of art.
You see into the heart within me,
right through my motives and selfish will.
And yet, in spite of all You see
You say You love me even still.
~by D.M.~
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true_noir_chloe - Posts: 3091
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Also, tell them, if you would, if they want to put up their pics for a more detailed critique (constructive of course) we'd be glad to help them out. I didn't have such an opportunity when I was 11, so I try to help those who are just starting when I can...^^
BOOSTER: Hey, No.1! Where's my cake?!
SNIFIT 1: Booster, Sir! There's a 70% chance the object you're standing on is a cake.
BOOSTER: What? THIS thing's a cake?
You have the power to say anything you want, so why not say something positive?
- Frank Capra
(in response to an interview question "Do you have a pet peeve having to do with this biz?")
People who write below their abilities in order to crank out tons of books and make a buck. Especially Christian authors who do that. Outsiders judge us for it, and make fun of us for it, and it makes Jesus look bad. We of all artists on earth should be the most concerned with doing our best possible work at all times. We of all people should write with all our hearts, as if writing for the Lord and not for men.
- Athol Dickson
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inkhana - Posts: 3670
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Okay, here's some more. What do you think of Sarah-chan's shading - that's my daughter.
What do you think of Sarah-chan's shading - that's my daughter.You do not have the required permissions to view the files attached to this post.
[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE
You see into the deepest part of me ---
beyond the fog I hide behind.
You cast your light upon the shadows
that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.
You ease the pain when I am hurting,
and morbid visions from my past
pierce into the realm of Reason
as though I danced on blades of glass.
You grant me strength when I have fallen
and, once again, I've lost my way.
You take my hand in Yours and lead me
into the promise of a brand new day.
You bring order to all my chaos,
yet set my well-laid plans awry.
You place me on a firm foundation ---
then give me wings so I can fly.
You sand away my roughened edges
and polish all the dullest parts
until I stand before Your presence...
a newly-sculpted work of art.
You see into the heart within me,
right through my motives and selfish will.
And yet, in spite of all You see
You say You love me even still.
~by D.M.~
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true_noir_chloe - Posts: 3091
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I'll show you her faces in pencil. I think she handles the facial expressions really well.
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[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE
You see into the deepest part of me ---
beyond the fog I hide behind.
You cast your light upon the shadows
that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.
You ease the pain when I am hurting,
and morbid visions from my past
pierce into the realm of Reason
as though I danced on blades of glass.
You grant me strength when I have fallen
and, once again, I've lost my way.
You take my hand in Yours and lead me
into the promise of a brand new day.
You bring order to all my chaos,
yet set my well-laid plans awry.
You place me on a firm foundation ---
then give me wings so I can fly.
You sand away my roughened edges
and polish all the dullest parts
until I stand before Your presence...
a newly-sculpted work of art.
You see into the heart within me,
right through my motives and selfish will.
And yet, in spite of all You see
You say You love me even still.
~by D.M.~
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true_noir_chloe - Posts: 3091
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I need to be fair, so here's another of my son's. The one's I'm posting of his so far are characters in a future manga he wants to write.
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[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE
You see into the deepest part of me ---
beyond the fog I hide behind.
You cast your light upon the shadows
that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.
You ease the pain when I am hurting,
and morbid visions from my past
pierce into the realm of Reason
as though I danced on blades of glass.
You grant me strength when I have fallen
and, once again, I've lost my way.
You take my hand in Yours and lead me
into the promise of a brand new day.
You bring order to all my chaos,
yet set my well-laid plans awry.
You place me on a firm foundation ---
then give me wings so I can fly.
You sand away my roughened edges
and polish all the dullest parts
until I stand before Your presence...
a newly-sculpted work of art.
You see into the heart within me,
right through my motives and selfish will.
And yet, in spite of all You see
You say You love me even still.
~by D.M.~
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true_noir_chloe - Posts: 3091
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Pic #1: Very nice! Good use of colors, very nice and bright. The hair - very shiny...^^ Also good use of shading. You may want to bring up with her darkening the pupils of the eyes for a little added depth, plus it makes the eyes sparkle more when you put the highlights on. Also, depending on the style she's going for, she might try making the ears a little larger and fit a little closer to the head (in this instance, they would probably disappear behind the hair). However, since ear style varies WILDLY from style to style, it probably isn't an issue.
Pic #2: Also nice! She shows good potential with expressions. The happy face is so kawaii...^^ Something I've found that helps me with expression is to make the irises of the eyes smaller; instead of the "column" of iris that a lot of artists use (which has a tendency to rob the eyes of expression in my case), use a rounder shape, like a real eye (unless they have REALLY huge eyes, in which case an oval works better...^^ )
Pic #3: Another good one! ^^ He looks very intense. Good lines on the shirt's collar; they have a lot of dimension. The eyes have a good shape and the eyebrows are positioned very well. The shoulders might be just a little low though (resulting in a neck that's just a hair too long).
Although it doesn't seem like it ought to be this way, studying a real human form goes miles in drawing anime, so you might have them study real human forms when they're working on their skills. When I was their age, I used catalogs a lot to get form, clothing folds, etc more accurate, even though I wasn't drawing anime back then. Those skills I learned drawing realism oddly enough did translate, plus it gives lots of opportunity for other kinds of drawings and makes an artist -very- versatile.
Hope this helps!
Pic #2: Also nice! She shows good potential with expressions. The happy face is so kawaii...^^ Something I've found that helps me with expression is to make the irises of the eyes smaller; instead of the "column" of iris that a lot of artists use (which has a tendency to rob the eyes of expression in my case), use a rounder shape, like a real eye (unless they have REALLY huge eyes, in which case an oval works better...^^ )
Pic #3: Another good one! ^^ He looks very intense. Good lines on the shirt's collar; they have a lot of dimension. The eyes have a good shape and the eyebrows are positioned very well. The shoulders might be just a little low though (resulting in a neck that's just a hair too long).
Although it doesn't seem like it ought to be this way, studying a real human form goes miles in drawing anime, so you might have them study real human forms when they're working on their skills. When I was their age, I used catalogs a lot to get form, clothing folds, etc more accurate, even though I wasn't drawing anime back then. Those skills I learned drawing realism oddly enough did translate, plus it gives lots of opportunity for other kinds of drawings and makes an artist -very- versatile.
Hope this helps!
BOOSTER: Hey, No.1! Where's my cake?!
SNIFIT 1: Booster, Sir! There's a 70% chance the object you're standing on is a cake.
BOOSTER: What? THIS thing's a cake?
You have the power to say anything you want, so why not say something positive?
- Frank Capra
(in response to an interview question "Do you have a pet peeve having to do with this biz?")
People who write below their abilities in order to crank out tons of books and make a buck. Especially Christian authors who do that. Outsiders judge us for it, and make fun of us for it, and it makes Jesus look bad. We of all artists on earth should be the most concerned with doing our best possible work at all times. We of all people should write with all our hearts, as if writing for the Lord and not for men.
- Athol Dickson
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inkhana - Posts: 3670
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Very very good! your kids are doing great! That last colored pic is really nice! Ink pretty much covered everything I would have said and more the only thing I can think of that it need is an iris there is no real center to the eye since it is all just one color with nothing to distinguish the center(iris) of the eye. I really like the shiny hair though 
Your sons sketch is very well done! He has the shape of the hair perfect (your kids do very good job on hair maybe I could learn from them 
) Um the only thing that I would change is the size of the eye (this more personal preference than anything else) I tend to make mine smaller and more narrow but the again that’s more for
for the older age groups so I guess it doesn’t really mater lol it just depends on what he is going for like the main characters in anime usually has some of the biggest eyes in the show where as the villain has extremely small and narrow eyes but most of the kid genre has really big eyes if he was going to draw something like a samurai then I would make the eyes smaller ok enough with my ranting lol my style is more closely related to Kenshin so when ever is see big eyes I think they need to be smaller lol
your kids are doing great! That last colored pic is really nice! Ink pretty much covered everything I would have said and more the only thing I can think of that it need is an iris there is no real center to the eye since it is all just one color with nothing to distinguish the center(iris) of the eye. I really like the shiny hair though
Your sons sketch is very well done! He has the shape of the hair perfect
(your kids do very good job on hair maybe I could learn from them ) Um the only thing that I would change is the size of the eye (this more personal preference than anything else) I tend to make mine smaller and more narrow but the again that’s more for
for the older age groups so I guess it doesn’t really mater lol it just depends on what he is going for like the main characters in anime usually has some of the biggest eyes in the show where as the villain has extremely small and narrow eyes but most of the kid genre has really big eyes if he was going to draw something like a samurai then I would make the eyes smaller ok enough with my ranting lol my style is more closely related to Kenshin so when ever is see big eyes I think they need to be smaller lol
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Wow! You're kid's draw really good! Kinda inspires me to go find a pencil...
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Thanks you guys (California term 
). I really appreciate your comments Ink and White Blaze. 
You've all been so sweet about my kid's drawings. Thanks a bunch.
). I really appreciate your comments Ink and White Blaze. You've all been so sweet about my kid's drawings. Thanks a bunch. [size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE
You see into the deepest part of me ---
beyond the fog I hide behind.
You cast your light upon the shadows
that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.
You ease the pain when I am hurting,
and morbid visions from my past
pierce into the realm of Reason
as though I danced on blades of glass.
You grant me strength when I have fallen
and, once again, I've lost my way.
You take my hand in Yours and lead me
into the promise of a brand new day.
You bring order to all my chaos,
yet set my well-laid plans awry.
You place me on a firm foundation ---
then give me wings so I can fly.
You sand away my roughened edges
and polish all the dullest parts
until I stand before Your presence...
a newly-sculpted work of art.
You see into the heart within me,
right through my motives and selfish will.
And yet, in spite of all You see
You say You love me even still.
~by D.M.~
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true_noir_chloe - Posts: 3091
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true_noir_chloe wrote:Okay, here's some more.
aww...that pic is so cute ^_^ . i love it.
nice work guys! keep it up and keep it coming.
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senjutsu - Posts: 89
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I think they're good on their way!
I like these two the most
http://www.christiananime.net/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=1302&stc=1&thumb=1
http://www.christiananime.net/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=1303&stc=1&thumb=1
I like these two the most
http://www.christiananime.net/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=1302&stc=1&thumb=1
http://www.christiananime.net/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=1303&stc=1&thumb=1
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Aibou, those are my two favorites too. Maybe I do have somewhat of an eye for art if you like them.
Thanks also to Senju. You're all being so nice.
Maybe I do have somewhat of an eye for art if you like them.
Thanks also to Senju.
You're all being so nice.[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE
You see into the deepest part of me ---
beyond the fog I hide behind.
You cast your light upon the shadows
that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.
You ease the pain when I am hurting,
and morbid visions from my past
pierce into the realm of Reason
as though I danced on blades of glass.
You grant me strength when I have fallen
and, once again, I've lost my way.
You take my hand in Yours and lead me
into the promise of a brand new day.
You bring order to all my chaos,
yet set my well-laid plans awry.
You place me on a firm foundation ---
then give me wings so I can fly.
You sand away my roughened edges
and polish all the dullest parts
until I stand before Your presence...
a newly-sculpted work of art.
You see into the heart within me,
right through my motives and selfish will.
And yet, in spite of all You see
You say You love me even still.
~by D.M.~
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true_noir_chloe - Posts: 3091
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I like em!
You might want to encourage pupils though where huge yellow eyes are concerned
You might want to encourage pupils though where huge yellow eyes are concerned
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I've heard that a lot. I'll tell them.^-^ Thanks, JediSonic.
[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE
You see into the deepest part of me ---
beyond the fog I hide behind.
You cast your light upon the shadows
that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.
You ease the pain when I am hurting,
and morbid visions from my past
pierce into the realm of Reason
as though I danced on blades of glass.
You grant me strength when I have fallen
and, once again, I've lost my way.
You take my hand in Yours and lead me
into the promise of a brand new day.
You bring order to all my chaos,
yet set my well-laid plans awry.
You place me on a firm foundation ---
then give me wings so I can fly.
You sand away my roughened edges
and polish all the dullest parts
until I stand before Your presence...
a newly-sculpted work of art.
You see into the heart within me,
right through my motives and selfish will.
And yet, in spite of all You see
You say You love me even still.
~by D.M.~
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true_noir_chloe - Posts: 3091
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My son might have an issue with being called "the boy."
Joshua-kun will be 14 at the end of this month. He will probably never join this board. He's too busy with other things, like his LAN clan, FFXI, and having friends over. He is a cutey though, according to my daughter's friends. How old are you?
Joshua-kun will be 14 at the end of this month. He will probably never join this board. He's too busy with other things, like his LAN clan, FFXI, and having friends over. He is a cutey though, according to my daughter's friends.
How old are you?[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE
You see into the deepest part of me ---
beyond the fog I hide behind.
You cast your light upon the shadows
that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.
You ease the pain when I am hurting,
and morbid visions from my past
pierce into the realm of Reason
as though I danced on blades of glass.
You grant me strength when I have fallen
and, once again, I've lost my way.
You take my hand in Yours and lead me
into the promise of a brand new day.
You bring order to all my chaos,
yet set my well-laid plans awry.
You place me on a firm foundation ---
then give me wings so I can fly.
You sand away my roughened edges
and polish all the dullest parts
until I stand before Your presence...
a newly-sculpted work of art.
You see into the heart within me,
right through my motives and selfish will.
And yet, in spite of all You see
You say You love me even still.
~by D.M.~
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true_noir_chloe - Posts: 3091
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- Location: Where Tex-Mex is the best! ^_____^
My son is a big gamer. He's uber friendly and kind, really honorable young man and knows all the gamers around this area. Because of this he's always getting freebies and betas, t-shirts, not yet released games and other stuff. One of his best buds is the asst. man. at the GameStop. The guys at the local game rental place let him go behind the desk and play their preview copies and then let him take them home. He's just like that, people just kind of draw to him.
Can I see some of your drawings?
I'll show you another of his. I think Kirby is so cute.
Can I see some of your drawings?
I'll show you another of his. I think Kirby is so cute.
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[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE
You see into the deepest part of me ---
beyond the fog I hide behind.
You cast your light upon the shadows
that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.
You ease the pain when I am hurting,
and morbid visions from my past
pierce into the realm of Reason
as though I danced on blades of glass.
You grant me strength when I have fallen
and, once again, I've lost my way.
You take my hand in Yours and lead me
into the promise of a brand new day.
You bring order to all my chaos,
yet set my well-laid plans awry.
You place me on a firm foundation ---
then give me wings so I can fly.
You sand away my roughened edges
and polish all the dullest parts
until I stand before Your presence...
a newly-sculpted work of art.
You see into the heart within me,
right through my motives and selfish will.
And yet, in spite of all You see
You say You love me even still.
~by D.M.~
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true_noir_chloe - Posts: 3091
- Joined: Wed Sep 10, 2003 12:00 pm
- Location: Where Tex-Mex is the best! ^_____^
To be fair I'll show you how Sarah has been improving on her eyes. What do you think? This is her blue girl.
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[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE
You see into the deepest part of me ---
beyond the fog I hide behind.
You cast your light upon the shadows
that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.
You ease the pain when I am hurting,
and morbid visions from my past
pierce into the realm of Reason
as though I danced on blades of glass.
You grant me strength when I have fallen
and, once again, I've lost my way.
You take my hand in Yours and lead me
into the promise of a brand new day.
You bring order to all my chaos,
yet set my well-laid plans awry.
You place me on a firm foundation ---
then give me wings so I can fly.
You sand away my roughened edges
and polish all the dullest parts
until I stand before Your presence...
a newly-sculpted work of art.
You see into the heart within me,
right through my motives and selfish will.
And yet, in spite of all You see
You say You love me even still.
~by D.M.~
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true_noir_chloe - Posts: 3091
- Joined: Wed Sep 10, 2003 12:00 pm
- Location: Where Tex-Mex is the best! ^_____^
This one she did today.
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[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE
You see into the deepest part of me ---
beyond the fog I hide behind.
You cast your light upon the shadows
that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.
You ease the pain when I am hurting,
and morbid visions from my past
pierce into the realm of Reason
as though I danced on blades of glass.
You grant me strength when I have fallen
and, once again, I've lost my way.
You take my hand in Yours and lead me
into the promise of a brand new day.
You bring order to all my chaos,
yet set my well-laid plans awry.
You place me on a firm foundation ---
then give me wings so I can fly.
You sand away my roughened edges
and polish all the dullest parts
until I stand before Your presence...
a newly-sculpted work of art.
You see into the heart within me,
right through my motives and selfish will.
And yet, in spite of all You see
You say You love me even still.
~by D.M.~
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true_noir_chloe - Posts: 3091
- Joined: Wed Sep 10, 2003 12:00 pm
- Location: Where Tex-Mex is the best! ^_____^
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Kat Walker - Posts: 321
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Nice eyes
You know what's SO FUNNY though? My name is Josh too! Not Josh-kun though
You know what's SO FUNNY though? My name is Josh too! Not Josh-kun though
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- Location: The Bible Belt :D
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