Peirced

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Peirced

Postby Danyasaur » Mon Feb 16, 2004 1:59 pm

ok, me writing a song that magicaly poped into my head? . . . not a good idea -_-" . . . ok, I only have the chorus, so if you think it's incomplete. . . . . . it is ^_^"

It's your hands, it's your feet, that were peirced to pay the price for me.
It's your hands, it's your feet, oh father if only we had seen, oh Lord, would you please, please forgive me. . .

ok, I'm fine now that I got the writer in me out ^_^" . . . you poor people, forced to sufer through my poor writing skills O_o"
[color="DimGray"]I don't believe that I would die if I saw you face to face;
but that my spirit would become so alive it took my body's place.

- Danya[/color]
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Postby Zilch » Mon Feb 16, 2004 7:20 pm

YOU MUST WRITE MORE! I, THE ALL POWERFUL VASH, DO NOT LIKE TO BE KEPT WAITING!!

Good stuff.
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