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The bad poetry of YesIExist!

Postby YesIExist » Wed Jan 21, 2004 10:05 pm

Temptation :bang:

I have all I need
Love, food, shelter, and air to breathe.
What is it about him
That lures me into wanting to sin?
He would rock my world, make all things unstable
Everything would be brought on the table.
There is no future or hope in him
The ice I consider walking upon is indeed thin.
He makes my head spin
Yet I find myself keep coming back again
I have decided that with him I'll have no part.
Not over his waters without a chart.
I do not need another master over me to reign.
Not with someone whose feelings are feigned.
So again, I keep my distance and move away.
But right after me he comes, leaving sanity at bay.
What can you do
With a person without a clue? :poke:
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Postby shooraijin » Thu Jan 22, 2004 8:05 am

Intriguing poem, YIE! Tell us a little about yourself.
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Postby Kokhiri Sojourn » Thu Jan 22, 2004 2:41 pm

Hmmm, I'm thinking the same thing as Shooraijin. It is a very expressive piece.
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Postby YesIExist » Thu Jan 22, 2004 3:01 pm

Hmm. Is it my writing style? :eyebrow:

Well, I exist.

I serve as entertainment.

Some might wish to possess me, though no one can but Christ. :hug:
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Postby true_noir_chloe » Thu Jan 22, 2004 7:30 pm

Your comment now further intrigues me. I'm trying to figure out where I've heard your name before. *lightbulb* Hi, I think I know you. I mean, I don't actually know you personally, but I think I know someone you know. Does that make sense? Probably not, but anyway, hi!:jump:

Please, write some more poems and then maybe we'll be able to get to know you better.:) YesIExist is a clever name, btw.

[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE


You see into the deepest part of me ---

beyond the fog I hide behind.

You cast your light upon the shadows

that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.

You ease the pain when I am hurting,

and morbid visions from my past

pierce into the realm of Reason

as though I danced on blades of glass.

You grant me strength when I have fallen

and, once again, I've lost my way.

You take my hand in Yours and lead me

into the promise of a brand new day.

You bring order to all my chaos,

yet set my well-laid plans awry.

You place me on a firm foundation ---

then give me wings so I can fly.

You sand away my roughened edges

and polish all the dullest parts

until I stand before Your presence...

a newly-sculpted work of art.

You see into the heart within me,

right through my motives and selfish will.

And yet, in spite of all You see

You say You love me even still.


~by D.M.~

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Postby Rachel » Fri Jan 23, 2004 4:08 pm

your poem was really cool. i enjoyed it very much.
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Postby YesIExist » Fri Jan 23, 2004 4:14 pm

Thanks

Hmm. Not inspired to write anything right now. Kinda tired.

I don't really write stories because it takes too much time. :)
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More pointless rhyming

Postby YesIExist » Thu Jan 29, 2004 3:28 pm

:bootout: Wheeeeee!!!

Hole-punching
Soul-crunching
I'm making no sense today
But with me, that's okay.

Looking at papers that caused
Fears and tears for many years
Wanting to please the instructor
But not knowing how
School papers
So important before
Just might be useless to me now
Not worth much anymore

Thought I'd throw in a few words here today
But I don't know where this is going anyway
So I'll shut up.

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Postby YesIExist » Thu Feb 05, 2004 6:43 pm

It's a funny thing
How so much planning
Can go into one day


Crap. There goes my shred of inspiration. :red:
Idle hands are indeed the devil's playground. -_- :bang:
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Postby Zilch » Tue Feb 10, 2004 3:58 am

YesIExist wrote:It's a funny thing
How so much planning
Can go into one day


Crap. There goes my shred of inspiration. :red:


Happens to the best of us.
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Postby churchgirl111 » Tue Feb 10, 2004 7:26 pm

lol hey your doing good
keep it up!
actually your screen name always intrigued me as well...interesting...*churchgirl111 ponder's meanwhile slipping into a vegetative state*
anways..i like your writing style and you have expressive poems that speak from your heart which is good! So keep it up and don't get discouraged!
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Postby Zilch » Tue Feb 10, 2004 7:41 pm

...you poems have some sort of...emotion I can't explain...almost...confusion...
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Postby churchgirl111 » Fri Feb 13, 2004 9:49 am

i agree...it is random yet structured...i think a good word might be chaotically happy...intrigued...interesting..
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Postby YesIExist » Fri Feb 20, 2004 12:26 am

Thanks.
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What is it about me
That makes me
So appealing?
What am I now doing
That makes
Your heart start reeling?

Can't you see
I'm inaccessible?
Can't you see
I'm taken?
How can I
Make myself CLEAR
So messages
Are not mistaken?

Could it be stubborness
Maybe desperation, too
That persuades you to follow
And endlessly pursue?

Whatever it is
You wish to find
You likely
Won't find it here

To draw others close to yourself
You must know the person in the mirror.

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I have problems with rhythm. :forehead:
Idle hands are indeed the devil's playground. -_- :bang:
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Postby Zilch » Fri Feb 20, 2004 3:16 am

Yeah, but they'll work out if you keep at it.
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Postby Zarn Ishtare » Fri Feb 20, 2004 6:19 am

hey, did anyone ever notice how shoorajin's avatar looks like Citan Uzuki from Xenogears? Or how theres a Jelly right behind him?
With your doubt, all is comfort
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
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Postby YesIExist » Fri Feb 20, 2004 10:13 am

Zarn Ishtare wrote:hey, did anyone ever notice how shoorajin's avatar looks like Citan Uzuki from Xenogears? Or how theres a Jelly right behind him?


What? :eyebrow:
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Postby YesIExist » Fri Feb 20, 2004 7:42 pm

My cat is insane. "MWOW? MWOW? MWOW?"

She doesn't want to stay in the basement. She's a big baby!

Random thought.
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