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Postby Yuna-Tairyl Kc » Tue Jan 27, 2004 4:59 am

can some one give me advise on my anime/manga drawings please
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As the cherry bloosom open's my heart grow's for you,
As the rose petal drop's I fall for you.


many people will walk in and out of your life, but it's true friends that will leave the foot prints behind....
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Postby Retten » Tue Jan 27, 2004 12:30 pm

Hey that's really good looking :thumb: um the only thing that I really notice is her bangs need to blend in with her hair more like the 3 on the right look like they are sitting on top of her hair and not part of it I would look around for some pics on the net for reference besides that it looks awsome! :jump:
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Postby true_noir_chloe » Tue Jan 27, 2004 7:45 pm

I like your picture, it's pretty good. ^_^ Sorry, I can't give advice since I'm not an artist. I say, just keep drawing and there are a lot of good books that you can look into, which my daughter uses. She has a lot of the "How to Draw Manga" series and "Anime and Game Characters." Those are really helpful for her. Her thread is here under, chibi_chan's art.

[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE


You see into the deepest part of me ---

beyond the fog I hide behind.

You cast your light upon the shadows

that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.

You ease the pain when I am hurting,

and morbid visions from my past

pierce into the realm of Reason

as though I danced on blades of glass.

You grant me strength when I have fallen

and, once again, I've lost my way.

You take my hand in Yours and lead me

into the promise of a brand new day.

You bring order to all my chaos,

yet set my well-laid plans awry.

You place me on a firm foundation ---

then give me wings so I can fly.

You sand away my roughened edges

and polish all the dullest parts

until I stand before Your presence...

a newly-sculpted work of art.

You see into the heart within me,

right through my motives and selfish will.

And yet, in spite of all You see

You say You love me even still.


~by D.M.~

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Postby Yuna-Tairyl Kc » Wed Jan 28, 2004 2:33 am

i leanrt how to draw simple characters by a web site called polykarbon
http://polykarbon.com

here's another pic, and i'll keep practicin' :thumb:
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many people will walk in and out of your life, but it's true friends that will leave the foot prints behind....
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Postby Retten » Wed Jan 28, 2004 10:16 am

!I really like that one good job!
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Postby Icarus » Wed Jan 28, 2004 7:00 pm

The first one reminds me of your avatar.
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