Hey Everybody,
Here's your very own premier of the brand new Episode for the brand new hit Anime Short Story Series, Aldean Chronicles. This Episode, Episode 26, is by CAA's very own Magekind, so come check it out!
Sincerely,
Gabriel McKnight,
Producer
Aldean Chronicles New Episode Premier - Episode 26: The Godless People; By: Magekind
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Aldean Chronicles New Episode Premier - Episode 26: The Godless People; By: Magekind
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starwarsboy90 - Posts: 655
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Just re-read it. Noticed some capitalization problems, particularly concerning Pain's name. That's about all the problems I spotted.
Take it like you gave it; what else matters in the end? To be honest, it's all a one-shot test; that leaves plenty of places to go wrong, but how will you ever know? There's a pointer, I will admit. Turn it on, listen to it, feel it burn.
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Lol, figures the Editor would have the problem with Capitalization. Guess he figured Pain wasn't exactly a character's name or something,lol. Well, I can re-read it and check the capitalization,lol.
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