huh.. what would one call this?

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huh.. what would one call this?

Postby SigmaKnight » Mon Aug 01, 2005 10:35 pm

I guess "Just something I threw together" fits... I just kinda put it together at the moment and I thought Id put it here since I haven't put anything here... uh.. ever.

It really probably isn't very good.. but here goes.

Rose tight in my hand
Scarlet drips down its stem
Prose fitly upon my lips

Petals fall
Peeling away the facade
Fluttering to the ground

The more that drop
The tighter the bulb
Untearable wall

Do you love me
Do you not

One first
Then another

The same
The same
Always
The same

Peel
Then stop
Peel
Then stop

Blocked out
Turned away

Crumpled
Torn

The same
The same
Always
The same
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Postby dragonshimmer » Tue Aug 02, 2005 6:33 am

Hmm...I don't know what you would TECHNICALLY call it, Siggy, but I think it's rather...appealing in a sad way. I like it.
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Postby Shadowchild » Tue Aug 02, 2005 6:52 am

awww sigma that was beautiful. reminds me of a poem or a love letter. that bas wonderful siggy. *hugs*
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