Solar Cycle

Website · Postby **Kawaiikneko** » Wed Jul 13, 2005 7:41 pm

Woot! That was my favorite section yet ^^ I love Gil! *glomp* <3 And the Cirrus centurion sounds cool. And the agents... evil... love them too.
Everyone: o.O;; so do you just like everyone in the story then?
Me: huummmm..... no I don't really like Burty. But he was fine in this chapter. yay.
XD
btw while I understand that its being planned to be a anime/manga... the grammar mistakes are a little distracting. But I'm a perfectionist in some ways, so its probably only me.

Postby **Myoti** » Wed Jul 13, 2005 7:47 pm

I'm a perfectionist too, but I'm lazy about checking stuff. XP I'll try to go back and fix them sometime.

I introduced the Cirrus character before (part 3) and this isn't the last you'll see of Zephyr.

Postby **Silvanis** » Wed Jul 13, 2005 8:15 pm

*glares evilly at Zephyr*

Postby **Myoti** » Fri Jul 15, 2005 7:36 pm

Part 6. Get ready for a heck of a ride.

Then get ready to wait for the next part as it continues this one. (Yes, I'm evil :evil:

)

Anyways, enjoy.

Postby **Silvanis** » Fri Jul 15, 2005 8:43 pm

As usual, I enjoyed it thouroughly! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Postby **Photosoph** » Fri Jul 15, 2005 11:21 pm

Another very exciting episode! I shall stayed tuned for next week's finale! Yes, hanging endings... grrr... >_<

While I really enjoyed the story, and for the most part everything was okay, a few grammatical errors did leave me confused as to who was doing what in one or two places. Like Kawaiikneko, I understand it's being planned to be an anime/manga, but have to agree that if little things like that were fixed up it would make it a lot smoother to read. ^_^

Postby **Myoti** » Sat Jul 16, 2005 5:31 am

Yes. Me stupid and lazy. And I could see some problems coming with the arrival of Agent "I". XP

I'll try to go back and fix those before going on with the story.

Postby **Silvanis** » Mon Jul 18, 2005 7:42 pm

Must...read...more!

Postby **Photosoph** » Mon Jul 18, 2005 11:09 pm

Thanks Myoti; that's really cool of you. Thanks for putting in the extra effort!

Website · Postby **Kawaiikneko** » Tue Jul 19, 2005 7:13 pm

Thanks Myoti! Sorry it took me so long to getting around to reading it ^^ Gideon is officially my favorite character (*o*)/

Postby **Sakura15** » Wed Jul 20, 2005 9:19 am

AHHHH!! I must read mooooore!! lol

Postby **Silvanis** » Wed Jul 27, 2005 6:41 pm

*glomps Gil* ^_^

Postby **Sakura15** » Wed Jul 27, 2005 8:02 pm

Silvanis wrote:*glomps Gil* ^_^

Gil is teh awesome! ^^

Postby **Silvanis** » Wed Jul 27, 2005 8:13 pm

Quite so!

Postby **Myoti** » Sun Aug 07, 2005 5:41 pm

Whoa, you guys really like Gil that much?
*Man, I really need to get a hold of a scanner...*

Okay, well, I'll get to the next part soon, hopefully. Of course, with school it could be a little tricky, but I'll do it! ^o^

Thanks Myoti! Sorry it took me so long to getting around to reading it ^^ Gideon is officially my favorite character (*o*)/

You do be realizin' who he is, right? *_*

Postby **Myoti** » Mon Aug 22, 2005 5:47 pm

Finally,, I have done it!

SC 7 is ready! And I actually proof-read it this time. WOOT! ^o^

Postby **Photosoph** » Tue Aug 23, 2005 6:31 pm

Aw man, cliffhanger! TT_TT

Very, very cool, as usual, Myoti. I really like the revelations, the doubts, and the new mysteries being alluded to. Also amazing fight scenes and drama. o__O Thanks heaps for spending more time on the grammar/spelling side, as well; otherwise having little mistakes like that can just get distracting.
It's so good to see more! :jump:

Postby **Myoti** » Tue Aug 23, 2005 6:40 pm

Thankees very mush. I means alot to hear I'm actually doing good.

I'll try to get to the next part sometime. It's gonna be a bit of a side track from the rest, but it'll show more strengths of the other characters (including some new surprises about a certain "foxy" lady).

Also, I'm planning on doing some pics for this, but, as you may know, they won't be much good till I get a scanner (which I hopefully should be getting one soon).

Postby **Photosoph** » Wed Aug 24, 2005 12:52 am

Ah yes; scanners... it'll be so cool once you get one! It'll be interesting to see your art style, and also whether my ideas of what the characters look like compare to how you envision them. ^_^ It'll be so cool when you get pics up!

Postby **Sakura15** » Wed Aug 24, 2005 5:14 am

Yaay! that was a awesome chapter ^^

Postby **Myoti** » Wed Aug 24, 2005 5:31 pm

^-^

Just you guys wait till the fifth member gets here. Heheh...

Postby **Photosoph** » Wed Aug 24, 2005 6:35 pm

Fifth member, eh? That sounds interesting... Muwha, muwha, MUWHAHAHAHAHA! (Sorry, an evil laugh just seemed so fitting. ^_^" )
Yes, I'm sure I'll enjoy meeting another cool character. The twist of bringing her uncle back was really cool... I wonder what other twists and cool characters you'll bring through. *Ponders.*

Postby **Sakura15** » Thu Aug 25, 2005 1:09 pm

Fifth member? ooo *suspense* :lol:

Postby **Myoti** » Thu Aug 25, 2005 3:02 pm

Yes, a fifth member will be joining, but not till Part 10, I believe. Why don't ya try to guess what kind it'll be? (Hint: Check the first part about the Maiden's prophecy)

I just recently decided to bring back another character from earlier later on, but no word to you yet on who it'll be (bwa ha ha ha!!!).

Man, though, there's this one part I've planned out already and just can't wait to get to you. Unfortunately, it won't be for quite a few more chapters...

Postby **Silvanis** » Sat Aug 27, 2005 6:54 pm

So excited!!! Once again, wonderful! Poor Gil. *lower lip quivers*

Postby **Myoti** » Thu Sep 15, 2005 6:25 pm

Ugh... sorry. I am going to get to the next part, I just gotta get the initiative to actually get around to finishing. I was working on part 8 and got... sidetracked. Stupid ADD...

Postby **Photosoph** » Sat Sep 17, 2005 11:19 pm

It's okay; I'll be waiting for when you do post more. Whoo for the subscribe to thread option! :grin:

Postby **Myoti** » Tue Sep 27, 2005 2:11 pm

Part 8. Don't seem that good to me, but, whatever. -_-

Enjoy.

[SPOILER]You may notice a certain pattern with the Daemon, but I did not copy this from FMA. I came up with it before I even knew what FMA was. :/ [/SPOILER]

Website · Postby **Kawaiikneko** » Tue Sep 27, 2005 8:08 pm

AHHH I'm behind O__O but its 11:00 and I can't catch up now. Darn you time! Darn you sleep!

Postby **insanewitapen** » Fri Sep 30, 2005 1:20 pm

O___O NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO~!!! *falls over* RGH this crap laptop wont let the attatchments work ToT *sigh* BUt I luv the first part!! My computer died and the hardrive fried and we're going to put in a new on on saturday...so after thats all fixed that computer should let the attatchments work ^-^ *cant wait* I really like it myoti!

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