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Looks like a story to me.

Postby Silvanis » Sat Jul 16, 2005 11:42 am

Enjoy! :P :
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She stared into the distance from her horse’s back. The wind blew her silver striped hair into her face. She had had quite a few questions about her hair from the other kids at school.
“Did you dye it?â€
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Postby Myoti » Sat Jul 16, 2005 11:50 am

Yeah, you did it! ^-^

Sounds pretty good so far to me.
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Postby Silvanis » Sat Jul 16, 2005 11:53 am

Thank you. *curtsies*
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Postby Photosoph » Wed Jul 20, 2005 4:29 pm

Very good -sorry that I haven't replied before! I saw the title, but haven't actually read it until now. ^_^
I like the mysteries so far -with the broach, the silver-striped hair, and the mysterious girl with the makeup, not to mention the abilities of the main character. Good writing too.

I'd like to see more, if you've written more of this; it's interesting so far and I'd like to see what happens next.
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Postby Silvanis » Wed Jul 20, 2005 5:55 pm

Cool! Thanx Photo! Myoti and I are planning to write it together when we get time. ^_^
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Postby AngelSakura » Wed Jul 20, 2005 6:03 pm

This reminds me of a short story that was part of the book "Merlin Dreams". It's good. ^^
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Postby Photosoph » Wed Jul 20, 2005 8:02 pm

Cool: 'Merlin Dreams'; that sounds like a good book. I'll have to see if I can find it in the library sometime.

Myoti and you together? Hey, I didn't know it was a joint story; cool!
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Postby Silvanis » Thu Jul 21, 2005 12:03 pm

I'm hoping! *crosses fingers* Thank you angelsakura!!! *curtsies*
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Postby Myoti » Sun Jul 24, 2005 1:10 pm

Yeah, we've been trying on hands/paws at some stories.
Now I just need Silvy to get back from whereever it is she keeps running off to! :lol:
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Postby Silvanis » Sun Jul 24, 2005 1:33 pm

I'm baaack! *waves*
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Postby Silvanis » Mon Jul 25, 2005 4:27 pm

Myoti? *looks around*
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Postby Myoti » Tue Jul 26, 2005 5:46 pm

Yesh? :3
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Postby Silvanis » Wed Jul 27, 2005 12:46 pm

You's here! Shall we continue the story? ^_^
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Postby the_lizardqueen » Wed Jul 27, 2005 3:33 pm

*is patiently awaiting the continuation of the story*

I like! It's very well written and mysterious, and any horse riding character with wolfish shapeshifting capapilities and silvery hair is very cool in my books :grin:
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Postby Silvanis » Wed Jul 27, 2005 3:58 pm

Thanks! :grin:
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Postby Photosoph » Wed Jul 27, 2005 4:31 pm

I like! It's very well written and mysterious, and any horse riding character with wolfish shapeshifting capapilities and silvery hair is very cool in my books

:lol: Boy is that true for me as well! :grin:
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Postby Silvanis » Wed Jul 27, 2005 6:10 pm

^_^ I'm so glad you like it! I just hope we can keep it interesting.
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Postby Silvanis » Sat Jul 30, 2005 5:55 pm

Well, I finished another bit of the story, but I must have Myoti look it over and approve. We are co-writing after all! Should be up soon.
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Postby Photosoph » Sun Jul 31, 2005 5:31 pm

That's cool! I shall wait for more.
*Pulls out an extra campfire and some marshmallows left over from cbwing's CAA tales and waits.*
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Postby Silvanis » Mon Aug 01, 2005 12:56 pm

*pops marsmallow in mouth and runs off to PM Myoti*
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