Life Acording to a Teen age Ninja

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Life Acording to a Teen age Ninja

Postby faithfighter » Sat May 14, 2005 7:48 pm

Dear friends, some for you know me and the rest I haven’t had the privilege of meeting, but one thing is the same for us all; we all belong or belonged to Master Ryu’s Dojo
I am writing this for you. It is a manual of what life is like in America incase you ever have the honor of going there. I should get start here:
Lesson 1: Making plans for the future is ok; believing those plans are made in concrete is a lie.
It was just like any other day. I got up before the sun rose. After breakfast I went out to train, that’s when Sensei came out.
“Hello Sensei â€
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Postby Steeltemplar » Sat May 14, 2005 7:59 pm

Wow! This is great, FF-chan! I love your narrative style. You're going to write more for us, right?
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Postby faithfighter » Sat May 14, 2005 8:31 pm

Of course...1 chapter a week...(cross fingers. nock on wood) except maybe next week...
So you really liked it??? Its pretty much the 1st story I have let anyone out side my family read..I admite I was nervouse...but I am glad you like it. after all I wrote it for you Steely!!!!
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Postby Steeltemplar » Sat May 14, 2005 8:32 pm

faithfighter wrote:Of course...1 chapter a week...(cross fingers. nock on wood) except maybe next week...
So you really liked it??? Its pretty much the 1st story I have let anyone out side my family read..I admite I was nervouse...but I am glad you like it. after all I wrote it for you Steely!!!!

I absolutely liked it FF-chan :)
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Postby faithfighter » Sat May 14, 2005 8:39 pm

Thanks *takes a bow*
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Postby Arnobius » Sat May 14, 2005 9:04 pm

Looks good to me. Maybe I ought to stop being lazy and do something...

Really good :thumb:
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Postby Warrior 4 Jesus » Sat May 14, 2005 9:15 pm

Nice narrative style! (is that your own or were you inspired by another author?) Need more story...
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Postby faithfighter » Sat May 14, 2005 9:30 pm

Thanks guys. It was my onw idea mostly..I ahd never seen a book like it, but there was a show, called Neds Declassified School Servival guide, but that is far more random then my story. I am glad you like it, I will try to write more on it soon.
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Postby Sakura15 » Sun May 15, 2005 4:55 am

Great Job, FF-chan! :thumb: :hug:
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Postby faithfighter » Sun May 15, 2005 1:11 pm

thank you
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Postby oro! » Sun May 15, 2005 6:28 pm

I think this will be very interesting. I always like this kinda story. Great job so far.(if that counts for anythin')
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Postby faithfighter » Sun May 15, 2005 6:31 pm

of course it counts I love it when people tell me what they think of my work...thank you.
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Postby Steeltemplar » Wed May 18, 2005 2:28 pm

So when are you going to write more for me?
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Postby faithfighter » Wed May 18, 2005 3:27 pm

writers block!!!...*sorrow. faints in frusrtation* all I have is really pathitic...and I probily wouldn't end up using it..Curse you writers block..Curse you!!
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Postby Steeltemplar » Wed May 18, 2005 8:17 pm

I know how that is!
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Postby faithfighter » Wed May 18, 2005 8:21 pm

It is sad.
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Postby Arnobius » Wed May 18, 2005 8:55 pm

I've been there many times (especially doing EGHS). Luckily i have you to fall back on)
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Postby faithfighter » Wed May 18, 2005 10:01 pm

aww thanks you so kind AH! *hugs*
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Postby faithfighter » Sat Sep 17, 2005 3:52 am

OOC: wow guess what! *jumps up and down* my writers block broke as of yesterday! whoot. well without further adue here is lesson 2...
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Lesson 2: welcome to suberbia
...there was a tall man with brown hair sprinkled with gray here and there, and there was a short, round women with blode hair and a cheery smile, beside them stood a girl about my age with blonde hair and a look of indifference on her overly make-uped face. Then there was the boy, he appeared older then me but only slightly. His hair was blonde and his eyes a bright shade of blue, of any he caught my eye the longest...though I am unsure why. I, for the 1st time in a long time, was nerviouse, but I choked down my fear and marched over to them. I put on a friendly smile and bowed "Konnichiwa," I said it being the jappenese greeting then switch to enlish "hello..." the family greeted me warmly, and even managed to speak a few japenese words. All except the girl, that is, she just rolled her eyes and acted anoyed. I shurged off her rudness and focused on the boy and his parents thier kindness was overwhemling but wonderful, and I eminsly enjoyed talking to them on the way to my new home. As I stepped out of thier Mini Van, I got my first glimps of what is called the Suberbs. There were houses placed closly together all very nicly kept, with flowers and bushes. everything was very beautiful, but there were no ppl anywhere. It was quite odd, but I kept these thoughts to myself and followed the family inside. The girl instantly disapeared upstairs, without ever saying a word to me.
"make yourself at home dear." the women, whoes name was Margert Lane said in her warm voice "Nathen willl show you around, wouldn't you Nathen?" she said to the boy who answered with a friendly nod.
"I am sorry to leave so quickly, Naily, but I must be getting back to work." the Man, who was Gary Lane said as he grabbed his breif case and headed out the door.
The whole time I said very little, it was so overwhelming, but I tired to be polite dispite my nerves.
"come this way Naily." the boy said heading up the stairs, I followed quickly behind, he showed me everything i would need to know ending with my room, which I shared with the girl, whom I finally realized was named Britney.
I have no idea what life in this house will be like...but it is making up to be an adventure...
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