So, my question is: would you guys mind that the first chapters aren't very good as long as I promise to work very, very hard on the newer ones?
*deep sigh*
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*deep sigh*
Er... I might post so chapters of an original story I've been working on for serval years now, and I wrote a couple chapters last year. But they're not very good. And I'm working on the next chapter right now. But its going slow. I don't have as much free time as I did when I was in middle school.
So, my question is: would you guys mind that the first chapters aren't very good as long as I promise to work very, very hard on the newer ones?
So, my question is: would you guys mind that the first chapters aren't very good as long as I promise to work very, very hard on the newer ones?
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CobaltAngel - Posts: 1950
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How are we supposed to now if they are good or bad if you don't post them? If you would like someone to proofread them for you, I could be of assistance.
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Lochaber Axe - Posts: 730
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Of course, please write. If you've been working on it for several years you need to start writing, let the muse take control. (I don't really believe in muses, but it sounds good. 
)
)[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE
You see into the deepest part of me ---
beyond the fog I hide behind.
You cast your light upon the shadows
that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.
You ease the pain when I am hurting,
and morbid visions from my past
pierce into the realm of Reason
as though I danced on blades of glass.
You grant me strength when I have fallen
and, once again, I've lost my way.
You take my hand in Yours and lead me
into the promise of a brand new day.
You bring order to all my chaos,
yet set my well-laid plans awry.
You place me on a firm foundation ---
then give me wings so I can fly.
You sand away my roughened edges
and polish all the dullest parts
until I stand before Your presence...
a newly-sculpted work of art.
You see into the heart within me,
right through my motives and selfish will.
And yet, in spite of all You see
You say You love me even still.
~by D.M.~
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