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Postby LostChild » Sun May 01, 2005 2:43 pm

SorasOathkeeper wrote:The llama one first. If you look on the Sawyer song one it says that they got it from thr llama song

cheater! you weren't supposed to look! *cries*

anyways, i do still have some stuff typed and ready to be critiqued, but not a whole lot until i find my notebook. *pouts* i also don't know what the last thing was that i posted. every time i go to look back at the other pages, my computer freezes, so bear with me if i already posted this, k? :sweat:



As Kaylin came down the flet, Limbar led the horses, and handed her the reins to the black horse. He was already bearing a small bundle of provisions such as small portions of food, and two flasks: one with water, the other contained vilin.

“He’s yours, Kaylin,â€
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Postby Photosoph » Sun May 01, 2005 4:35 pm

Nope, we haven't read that before. ^_^ Argh, computer freezes... comps are wonderful yet annoying pieces of technology. :P
Cool! This bit also held my attention (<- it was 'interesting'... but I think I've used the word 'interesting' to describe many other chapters of this, so I thought I'd add a new twist to the wording. ...Hope that makes sense!)
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Postby LostChild » Sun May 01, 2005 7:38 pm

'course it makes sense! what "should" be sane to most people, is completely insane to me; and what is insane to most people is sane to me! ^_^ you probably made it through that one because it was short, too. i think its the shortest section i've yet to write.

*cries* i still can't find it! WAAAAHHHH!!!!!!! *is distracted* hea! look! LOTR:ROTK is on! "Careful master! Careful! Very far to fall... very dangerous on The Stairs. Come master! Come to Smeagol!... Why does he hates poor Smeagol? What has he ever done to him? Master carries heavy burden, heavy, heavy burden..."
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Postby Photosoph » Sun May 01, 2005 8:29 pm

Smeagol... ^_^ Go gollum! Go-llum... gollum... Hmm... that sounds almost like a song...
Gollum, gollum,
I live in a cave with a voice like a drum,
Gollum, gollum,
I'll tell you some riddles if you tell me some...
Gollum, gollum,
No, that is my ring! Don't take that one!
Gollum, gollum,
Alone now I sit and sing what I sung:
gollum, gollum.
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Postby LostChild » Sun May 01, 2005 9:40 pm

did u come up with that off the top of ur head? coolishness! http://www.albinoblacksheep.com/flash/taters.php
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Postby Warrior 4 Jesus » Mon May 02, 2005 7:59 pm

As Kaylin came down the flet, Limbar led the horses, and handed her the reins to the black horse. He was already bearing a small bundle of provisions - small portions of food, and two flasks: one with water, the other contained vilin.

“He’s yours, Kaylin,â€
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Postby LostChild » Mon May 02, 2005 9:25 pm

hea! no worries, mon. its ayre. ^_^

okay, so get this. at school, we're having an international day, and everyone needs to dress up like someone from another country. seeing as how i don't have the money to even go grocery shopping, i pulled some clothes out of my closet, mixed 'em up, printed out some pictures, and presto! i'm now a Koala-Lander. ^_^ i would've been a Kiwi-Lander, but last time i was talking to one of my teachers, they were like, "What/ where is New Zealand?" that was totally pathetic.... anyways, there's gonna be a competition tomorrow, and i wanna give it a try in winning. ^_______^
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Postby Warrior 4 Jesus » Mon May 02, 2005 9:38 pm

That's awesome Lost! Nice and creative! Good luck!
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Postby Photosoph » Mon May 02, 2005 10:34 pm

hea! no worries, mon. its ayre. ^_^

okay, so get this. at school, we're having an international day, and everyone needs to dress up like someone from another country. seeing as how i don't have the money to even go grocery shopping, i pulled some clothes out of my closet, mixed 'em up, printed out some pictures, and presto! i'm now a Koala-Lander. ^_^ i would've been a Kiwi-Lander, but last time i was talking to one of my teachers, they were like, "What/ where is New Zealand?" that was totally pathetic.... anyways, there's gonna be a competition tomorrow, and i wanna give it a try in winning. ^_______^


Rofl!
Yeah, it sometimes annoys me how it seems like no one knows about NZ, or thinks it's somewhere in australia ( :lol: )... and one of your TEACHERS didn't know where it was? Rofl! Oh well. LOTR helped the geographic knowledge of NZ a little bit. And I guess I can always explain if no one knows where it is. Besides I can hardly complain: despite having a Dad in the travel industry, my geography skills are terrible. If you asked me to name the 5(1?) states of America, I'd probably include a city like New York :grin: Hmm... that's a good idea... how many do I know?
Rhode Island...
Michigan
Canada (no, I'm just joking!)
Idaho
California
And I know more than that by name, but I can't remember them off the top of my head. And, as said, I'd probably think some of the cities were states.
Oh yeah! Hawaii's one too. I've actually been there.
I did okay in Maths. Good in other subjects. But when it came to Geography I think I remember barely passing it... (and all we had to do was place main NZ cities on a map) which is why I dropped it as soon as possible.
I guess that means some people just don't know much about the world. But a teacher? That does surprise me.
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Postby LostChild » Tue May 03, 2005 4:37 pm

well, if you asked me to name all the states, i wouldn't get too far. maybe up to like, 15-25. pretty sad, ain't it? well, if i had the choice, NZ would be the #1 state! ^____^
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Postby LostChild » Wed May 04, 2005 10:52 pm

i've got some good news, and i've got some bad news.

Good news: I found my notebook, so i can start to type up what i wrote a few weeks ago.

Bad news: i lost a bunch of money from my car inssurance... no wait, that "supposed" to be "good" news, and this ain't even Geiko, is it? okay, bad news is that i can't type it up tonight because i'm going to bed right now. wish me luck with the twin day tomorrow! ^____^
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Wed May 04, 2005 10:56 pm

Rofl! Good luck!
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Postby Photosoph » Thu May 05, 2005 1:55 pm

Good luck! Hope you have/have had a great sleep. Mmm.... bed... ;)
I'm so glad you found your notebook! It would've been annoying to have lost all that work.
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Postby LostChild » Thu May 05, 2005 3:33 pm

^_^ no kiddin', huh? here's s'more stuff. woo-hoo!


Just as Limbar had said, Gillias was basking in the sunshine enjoying Draqon’s company.

“Come on, Gillias,â€
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Postby Warrior 4 Jesus » Sat May 07, 2005 4:23 am

Just as Limbar had said, Gillias was basking in the sunshine enjoying Draqon’s company.

“Come on, Gillias,â€
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Sat May 07, 2005 2:54 pm

I am so confused about whats going on. *is out of it* Can you m-mail me your story Lost? And why does my ice cream tast coffey flavoren now? YUCK!
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Postby Photosoph » Sat May 07, 2005 4:07 pm

Coffey flavoren? Hmm... interesting flavour. ^_^ Personally I don't like coffee-flavoured stuff; especially ice cream. Yoghurt tasted weird coffee-flavour, although CA liked it. *shrug*
Yay, you found and wrote and posted s'more! :jump:
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Postby LostChild » Sat May 07, 2005 7:17 pm

so now i'm all happy-ish. ^_^ ya, i'll email it to ya, sora. and to the rest of ya'll, i'll post s'more hopefully later tonight. we're gonna go out for mom's mother's day dinner. we would go tomorrow, but it'd be too dang croweded.
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Postby LostChild » Sat May 07, 2005 7:48 pm

well, i guess that we're not going out after all, so i'll post s'more. ^_^


As the three set off, Albekcc turned to Draqon who was staring after Kaylin, not willing to take his gaze from her for fear of some evil thing befalling her. He could not bear to have anything happen to her if the culprit was to be Limbar.

Albekcc wondered when Kaylin might return, if she should return. Not that some mortally fatal wound would grip its teeth upon her, but that she was being trained to become a Dragon Rider, and possibly go on to be dubbed a Royal One. With either of these, it would be highly unlikely that she would ever return.

“Albekcc,â€
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Postby Photosoph » Sat May 07, 2005 11:34 pm

so now i'm all happy-ish. ^_^ ya, i'll email it to ya, sora. and to the rest of ya'll, i'll post s'more hopefully later tonight. we're gonna go out for mom's mother's day dinner. we would go tomorrow, but it'd be too dang croweded.


That's cool! It means you get to share Mother's Day with us Southern-Hemisphere ppl. :)

I like the feeling that last chapter had. You really brought through that wistful watching look Albekcc had as he gazed after them. Nice one!
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Postby Warrior 4 Jesus » Sun May 08, 2005 5:07 am

Well done Lost! No problems that I could find. ;)
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Postby LostChild » Mon May 09, 2005 3:45 pm

cool, that must be the first with anything i've ever done! ^_^ so ya'll thought that poem thing wasn't a bit much? i was/ am worried that it would be....
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Postby Anna Mae » Wed May 11, 2005 5:24 am

Yay! More story! Good work. I liked the mysterious verse stuff.
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Postby LostChild » Thu May 12, 2005 6:48 am

:grin: thanx! can anyone think of a title for chapter 5? i'm stuck...
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Thu May 12, 2005 11:34 am

THE DAY THEY ALL DIED!!! *_*

*everyone stairs*

"....."

"Ok....maybe not....." *walks off*

lol, j/k. Just in every stori Lost always goes "THEY ALL DIE!" and i'm like "No." lol, it's funny
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Postby Photosoph » Thu May 12, 2005 1:16 pm

Hmm... 'Dragons and Deciet?' how would that be?

[button="..."]THEY ALL DIE![/button]
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Thu May 12, 2005 1:25 pm

Photosoph wrote:[button="..."]THEY ALL DIE![/button]

[button=*_*]YES!!! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!![/button]
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Postby Photosoph » Thu May 12, 2005 1:32 pm

What on earth? We're actually on AT THE SAME TIME? Hmm... I don't remember this happening before. What's the time there? Here it's 8:32 AM.
*pokes Sora*
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Thu May 12, 2005 11:03 pm

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Any how it was 1:25 PM when i posted that, it is now 11:03 PM *tired... -_- Zzzzzz*
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Postby LostChild » Fri May 13, 2005 7:15 am

Dragons and Deciet. i like it! gracias. ^_^
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