My First Song

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My First Song

Postby anime4christ » Fri Apr 29, 2005 12:19 am

Hey, techno freaks! I made a dance song in fruity loops, it's the first one that actually sounds like a song. It's an instrumental. Check it out and tell me where I might need to change stuff around or something. Oh, and what dhould I name it? I need a good Christian title. Thanks.

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Edit:here's another temporary site for my music so that I don't run out of space and bandwidth on geocities:

http://home.ripway.com/2005-5/301675/
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Postby CreatureArt » Fri Apr 29, 2005 2:53 am

Hmm... I tried to open the file first by clicking on the link and second by saving it and trying to open it in Winamp. A seemingly unrelated (?) website came up at first, and I couldn't get it to play for the second attempt.
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Any suggestions? :P . I would really like to listen to the song! :)
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Postby anime4christ » Fri Apr 29, 2005 9:19 am

aw, them @$%# don't allow hotlinking, lol!
Ok, try this one: http://chudosok.info/praise2.mp3
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Postby CreatureArt » Sat Apr 30, 2005 4:03 am

Will do. I'm going to have to wait until tomorrow so I don't wake up the rest of the family, but I'm looking forwrad to reading it. Thanks so much, A4C!
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Postby anime4christ » Sat Apr 30, 2005 9:16 am

reading? it's a music file. to listen to
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Postby CreatureArt » Sat Apr 30, 2005 2:53 pm

Whoops - sorry, I hate it when I mix up verbs :lol: . I'm looking forward to listening to it, then. It seems to be working this time and its morning so I'll be able to listen to it - though I'm on dialup so it'll take a wee while to download. :)

<<EDIT>>
I'm really enjoying it! It's very easy on the ear and I like the beat a lot. The melody is also very nice and crisp above it. The... I don't know what instrument it is, but it sounds 'distorted' in a good way is really nice at the end, too. Have you got any more songs? :thumb:
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Postby anime4christ » Sat Apr 30, 2005 3:14 pm

I just made one more, this one has a title, lol. Hold on, let me upload it. What should I name my first song?
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Postby anime4christ » Sat Apr 30, 2005 3:22 pm

Beautiful is Your Creation - Detya Bozhye
I'm gonna eat all of my mom's bandwidth, jk :lol:
Detya Bozhye ( Детя Боже ) means God's Child in Russian ;)
BTW, that instrument at the end is really made up of a few instruments.
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Postby anime4christ » Sat Apr 30, 2005 4:12 pm

There's some problem with the server, part of the song didn't get uploaded properly, I'll post when I get it working properly.
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Postby mai » Sat Apr 30, 2005 6:28 pm

It sounds really cool ^-^ I was wondering, what exactly is fruity loops? how much did you pay for it?
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Postby anime4christ » Sat Apr 30, 2005 6:37 pm

FL Studio 5 Producer Edition $149 (formerly known as Fruity Loops)
Probably the best program for making music, if anyone wants to make music, I would recommend FL Studio, even though it's a little hard to master it at first. Don't fall for eJay or stuff like that, eJay is mostly samples and anyone who has it will automatically recognize it and say, this person is way unprofessional. FL Studio is the way to go.
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Postby CreatureArt » Sat Apr 30, 2005 7:09 pm

Hmm... a name for the first one.
I'll have a go at coming up with a few names for you to pick from.

Open Infinity (or just Infinity), Frozen Sky, Clear Waters. It just has that kind of blue, sparkling feeling, if that makes sense.
Yeah! I'm going to listen to your second song... once it loads :P . Excellent music: do you mind if I add it to my playlist?
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Postby anime4christ » Sat Apr 30, 2005 7:22 pm

maybe Living Waters?
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Postby anime4christ » Mon May 02, 2005 12:15 pm

Ok, go to http://geocities.com/anime4christ for my music. I hate hosting issues! :lol: Oh, and I fixed a small issue with my first song, so dl that one again from geocities. Thanks for the title suggestions. And go ahead and add my music to your playlist!
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Postby CreatureArt » Mon May 02, 2005 4:23 pm

Yeah! It's on there now. :) .

I really enjoy listening to your music. Keep doing update posts when you've done more, ok? Living Waters sounds awesome. It definitely has that refreashing feeling to it (to me at least). :thumb:
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Postby anime4christ » Mon May 02, 2005 4:53 pm

did you dl them from geocities or chudosok?
I also made a short Eurotechno track and uploaded that one to geocities. It's more of a hard, funky track.
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Postby anime4christ » Mon May 02, 2005 4:54 pm

:waah!: I ran out of bandwidth!

Edit: I think it should work in an hour
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Postby CreatureArt » Mon May 02, 2005 5:23 pm

I downloaded them from the first post's second link, if that makes sense. :P . SOrry to hear about the bandwith. Lol - that's one good thing about dailup that makes up for the slowness.
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Postby anime4christ » Mon May 02, 2005 8:01 pm

No, I ran out of bandwidth on geocities, not on my cable. I get unlimited bandwidth for browsing. Dial-up has absolutely no advantages over cable. Download from geocities, cuz the ones you have and the ones on chudosok are overamped. I fixed them and uploaded to geocities. And geocities has restored my site. So get em while you can.
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Postby Warrior 4 Jesus » Mon May 02, 2005 8:06 pm

I greatly dislike this genre but your music creation is quite good as far as electronic music goes!
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Postby anime4christ » Mon May 02, 2005 8:08 pm

Thanks. One question, why exactly do you dislike electronia, if you don't mind me asking?
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Postby anime4christ » Tue May 03, 2005 10:37 pm

Ok, I uploaded another Eurotechno track. I think guitar (not electric) sounds cool in dance
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Postby CreatureArt » Tue May 03, 2005 10:51 pm

I'm unable to check any out tonight due to a large-scale illustration that has to be in tomorrow - but I'll listen to the new ones when I can and they're all sounding awesome so far!
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Postby anime4christ » Tue May 03, 2005 11:00 pm

My third and fourth tracks are a little funky.
And did you re-download the first two from geocities?
Cuz the ones on chudosok were overamped.
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Postby anime4christ » Thu May 05, 2005 7:35 pm

I added another site where I host my music:

http://home.ripway.com/2005-5/301675/
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Postby anime4christ » Fri May 06, 2005 9:18 pm

Hey, I made a midi version of beautiful Is Your Creation! You can put it on your cell phone if it supports polyphonic ringtones! It's on ripway.
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Postby anime4christ » Sat May 07, 2005 1:51 pm

I also added Beautiful Is Your Creation (extended remix). Enjoy!
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Postby Sakura15 » Sat May 07, 2005 1:53 pm

Awesome! :thumb: :grin:
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Postby anime4christ » Sat May 07, 2005 1:55 pm

which one is ur fav?
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Postby Sakura15 » Mon May 09, 2005 10:44 am

Hmm, I like the beautiful creation extended remix and the world praises your name.
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