kawaiikneko wrote:As far as Cree could tell, she was only a few years younger maturity wise, but Phyr didn’t even know her own age.
kawaiikneko wrote:Her body twisted with the natural aerial grace of the lyate and gatomye as she flew through her element.
kawaiikneko wrote:Soft golden curls bounced around her shoulders, held out of her face with a large pink bow.
kawaiikneko wrote:Her mental and physical maturity seems to be a few years younger than Cree (who's about 13 or 14). In actuality she's probably a year or two older because of the way lyate grow and mature.
kawaiikneko wrote:I'm not sure what you mean by "to be" verbs though <.<]
There is no need to feel badly about your question. It is any conjugation of the verb "to be"-- I am, you are, he/she is, they are, we are, I was, you were, etc. As an example, I will mark the instances of it in one of the paragraphs I mentioned.kawaiikneko wrote:He was an elf, tall and lithe, but still strong and well-built. His hair was unnaturally black, very uncommon when it came to elves, but Cree thought it looked beautiful. Now it was tied back at the nape of his neck, but she desperately wanted to see what it looked like hanging around his face. His eyes were a silvery hue that she loved, even though she had to admit she liked her own red eyes better despite how scary they looked to other people. He handled the animals of the stables very gently, something which Cree greatly respected. His name was Aethiel.
Kawaiikneko wrote: did you mean to start a new paragraph every line?
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