Sasuke poem ^^ heh chicken of doom! ^^

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Sasuke poem-RK fan poem ^^ heh chicken of doom! ^^

Postby girlninja » Fri Jan 21, 2005 11:16 am

^^ hope ya like i had fun writing it at least ^^


The celestial heavens bear down
upon the one with the word "Bad" on his back
a word that is imbedded past the cloth that it's on
a word that bears the reputation of many bloodied hands
of slaughter
of death
of lasting peril
Is there redemption?

Bare knuckles
the Zanbato of the depths
lonely and afraid
wearing a mask to hide
wearing a mask to flee
from the ill fated word on his back

Of all the blood he has spilt, the bones he has shattered
he doesn't look up
of all the horror he faces
he can't feel the loving wings around him
he screams away the voices of God
his guiltied soul unwilling
unable
unyielding to the humble calls of the angels

Yet in his soul
in his heart of hearts
in the depths of the body
that wishes to flee
he seeks Him
he aches for Him
Lord, will he ever see?


^_^ BANANA!! :dance:
"If not now then when? If not me then who?-anonymous

and of course now i must instill the Dancing BANANA'S!
:dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance:

WHY AM I CRYING IN FRENCH-Vash the Stampede

ORORORORORO!-Himura Kenshin

:jump: :lol: :thumb:

"It is not weak to value human life!"-Raiden, Mortal Combat II

98% of the teenage population does or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature.

*ADOPTED BY* ..yea i know scary I got a adopted ~_^

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Postby Razgriz » Sat Jan 22, 2005 3:20 pm

It's very cool :thumb: I like the 4th stanza
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Postby Esoteric » Sat Jan 22, 2005 6:05 pm

Nice poem. I'm not a RK fan, but isn't it Sanosuke? Sasuke made me think of Naruto.
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Postby Kesshin » Sun Jan 23, 2005 5:53 pm

Nice one, girlninja-chan! ^^ It fits his personality and story nicely. Sanosuke's my favorite RK character, but you don't see a lot of poems about him. Mostly they're about Kenshin (not that there's anything wrong with that), but it's nice to see someone break out of the mold once in a while. :thumb: Keep it up.
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Postby girlninja » Mon Jan 24, 2005 1:22 am

Esoteric wrote:Nice poem. I'm not a RK fan, but isn't it Sanosuke? Sasuke made me think of Naruto.



uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh you didn't see that >.> <,< *ninja poofs to fix it real quick* *erase erase erase* *fix fix fix* realizes she can't change it nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

*adds a paper sign adding in the "no"

there no one will notice ^^
"If not now then when? If not me then who?-anonymous

and of course now i must instill the Dancing BANANA'S!
:dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance:

WHY AM I CRYING IN FRENCH-Vash the Stampede

ORORORORORO!-Himura Kenshin

:jump: :lol: :thumb:

"It is not weak to value human life!"-Raiden, Mortal Combat II

98% of the teenage population does or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature.

*ADOPTED BY* ..yea i know scary I got a adopted ~_^

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Postby Esoteric » Mon Jan 24, 2005 5:29 pm

girlninja wrote:uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh you didn't see that >.> <,< *ninja poofs to fix it real quick* *erase erase erase* *fix fix fix* realizes she can't change it nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

*adds a paper sign adding in the "no"

there no one will notice ^^


Bwahahahahaha! Your ninja tricks won't work on me--I'm still wearing my ninja shirt/hood! I don't forget anything when I'm wearing this! *forgets the time while busy laughing* Eeeeep! I'm gonna be late for class! *runs out of the room in panic*

LOL
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