Confusing

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Confusing

Postby Nasu-ne » Sat Nov 06, 2004 11:22 pm

-Insanity-

Sometimes you want to just be remembered….to not be forgotten into depths….cracks on pavement; in shadows on walls.

Some people do not want to disappear into the artwork of a masterpiece; only to reappear for some mindless task.

SOME PEOPLE! WANT TO BE REMEMBERED….but they can only be forgotten….as they haven’t a name or family….they have nothing…as they have been stripped of such things…..they have permanently been confined into the wood and paint of walls. Only having a hole to which they can look at the world…and the world see them as they truly are….

Some people….


The girl put down her pen and looked up to her brother. His auburn hair matching hers and his green eyes in contrast with her honey brown.

Setting the journal on her nightstand and quickly heading out of her room, she smiled to herself….

But then again....some people…only want to disappear…
"Laughing in the Rain...."
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Postby agasfas » Sun Nov 07, 2004 11:08 am

That's deep. I really like your writing. On so many levels we all feel like that at times. Great job! :thumb:
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