The wanderers search.

Unleash your creative writing skills here.
Post a reply

The wanderers search.

Postby Kura Ookami » Sat Sep 25, 2004 12:15 pm

I thought up this poem while i was thinking about searching for the truth. It doesnt rhyme at all, but a poem doesnt really need to rhyme. I hope you all like it. :)

I am the dark wanderer
I travel with nobody
Trying to discover the truth
Where ever i should travel

Is this a noble quest?
Searching, al;ways for answers
Nobody has ever suceeded
Will I be the first to find it?

People look for it in God
And search for it in science
Neither path seems to have worked
But both have got close to the truth

The truth should be self-evident
One single ultimate truth
I have traveled a lifetime
And yet, i still have not found it

The only place i have not looked
Is deep within myself
I will start my inner journey
Perhaps the truth is within.
Absence is to love as wind is to a flame. It extinguishes the little, it ignites the great.

Life is a test. It is only a test. Had this been real life you would have have been instructed where to go and what to do.

When i argue with reality I lose.....But only 100% of the time.

Once you've decided on a course of action, only you can finish it. As long as you remember that, there's nothing you can't accomplish.
User avatar
Kura Ookami
 
Posts: 766
Joined: Thu Sep 23, 2004 10:00 am
Location: United Kingdom
Top

Postby shadowblade » Mon Sep 27, 2004 9:31 am

I don't think you need any rhyming with this piece. I think it might've taken away from the piece if you had. I thought it flowed really well, and I really enjoyed reading it. :) I know I've felt like that before. Just had to realize that Jesus had the answers all along. :)

Proud Member of the Challengers Guild ^_^

Life is not about us using God for our purposes, but about Him using us for His purposes.

Faith is not creating a false reality, but acknowledging God's promises for us.

The dreams I dream for you
Are deeper than the ones your clinging to
Let the old dreams die
Like stars that fade from view
And take the cup I offer
And drink deeply of the dreams I dream for you
-Avalon

[color=Navy]Bill: Ted, you and I have witnessed many things, but nothing as bodacious as what just happened.
Besides, we told ourselves to listen to this guy...
Ted: But what if we were lying?
Bill: Why would we lie to ourselves?
-Bill and Ted's Excellent Adventure[/color]
User avatar
shadowblade
 
Posts: 213
Joined: Mon Sep 13, 2004 9:20 am
Location: Lost in my own imagination
Top

Postby Jaltus-bot » Mon Sep 27, 2004 11:17 pm

I could totally second everything Shadowblade has said here. Keep up the writing. :)
When I feel blue, I start breathing again.

Asdvadz hedut ullah! (W. Armenian, "May God bless you!")

It's cosplay, get used to it.

"A hero need not speak. For when he is gone, the world will speak for him."

"One of the nice things about diseases of the brain is they tend to slip your mind." Colbert
User avatar
Jaltus-bot
 
Posts: 1822
Joined: Mon Jun 14, 2004 4:00 am
Location: Almost there.
Top
Post a reply

Return to Writing

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 28 guests

Powered by phpBB® Forum Software © phpBB Group
 

Loading

Please wait.