The Brother Boys (a story I'm writing)

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The Brother Boys (a story I'm writing)

Postby c-girl » Sat May 22, 2004 4:01 pm

Kylie has always lived on the road with her mom. Her mom is always getting a new boyfriend and she never had a real dad or someone to talk to. But when her mom leaves her at a cafe in nowhere Idaho and doesn't come back. Kylie ends up being taken in by 5 crazy and cursed boy.

I hope I told enough in this summary about it. :sweat: I didn't know what else to say about it . But I'll try putting the story on a forum. (Like a chapter.) This book is a comedy and I hope this summary sorta got you interested...
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Postby AngelSakura » Sat May 22, 2004 4:29 pm

Sounds almost like Furuba....=)
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Postby PotBelliedCow » Sat May 22, 2004 8:25 pm

Sounds fun...can't wait :)
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Postby c-girl » Sun May 23, 2004 6:30 am

Yayz! :dance: And about the furuba thing. The boys are cursed , but it's not that noticable. You probably won't realize it until the boys actually tell about it. It's a different curse..
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Postby c-girl » Sun May 23, 2004 1:01 pm

:comp: AAaargg! I'm trying to type my story on here! but everytime I type for a long time the computer thinks I'm logged off or something!!! :comp: :bang: WHAT am I doing wrong?!
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Postby AngelSakura » Sun May 23, 2004 5:16 pm

Type it on Word or something then log on and copy and paste.
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Postby c-girl » Sun May 23, 2004 7:44 pm

Thanks for the advice.
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Postby true_noir_chloe » Mon May 24, 2004 1:57 pm

Yes, a copy and paste is soooooo much better. ^_^ Christiangirl, I haven't seen you in a long time. I'm glad you're back. ^_^ The story sounds pretty good so far. I think it will be very interesting and I look forward to when you post it.

[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE


You see into the deepest part of me ---

beyond the fog I hide behind.

You cast your light upon the shadows

that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.

You ease the pain when I am hurting,

and morbid visions from my past

pierce into the realm of Reason

as though I danced on blades of glass.

You grant me strength when I have fallen

and, once again, I've lost my way.

You take my hand in Yours and lead me

into the promise of a brand new day.

You bring order to all my chaos,

yet set my well-laid plans awry.

You place me on a firm foundation ---

then give me wings so I can fly.

You sand away my roughened edges

and polish all the dullest parts

until I stand before Your presence...

a newly-sculpted work of art.

You see into the heart within me,

right through my motives and selfish will.

And yet, in spite of all You see

You say You love me even still.


~by D.M.~

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Postby c-girl » Tue May 25, 2004 3:43 pm

I'm gonna get it on here as fast as I can. Nice see you again too! >^^<
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Postby c-girl » Tue May 25, 2004 8:39 pm

Aaaarg! The first half of this story is in Oregon(I'll have to tell daddy to mail it to me on a floppy disk) Well anyways. Since I feel like it. I'll tell you the character's names and age.

Kylie: 13 years old.
Gregg: Oldest brother he's 18 years old.
Josh: 2nd oldest brother 15 years old
Pat: 3rd oldest brother also 15 years old (31 minutes younger than Josh )
Joseph: 4th brother 14 years old
Robert: 5th brother 13 years old
Renee: Kylie's mom (she doesn't have an age right now. >^^<;;
Well that's it for now.
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