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Postby ice122985 » Fri Apr 02, 2004 4:19 pm

uh, guys, i need help. i would like to write a story. but i don't know how to have a story about Christian morals, with action in it. any help would be appreciated. thanks.
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Postby blueraven » Sat Apr 03, 2004 5:42 pm

Hm, I'm not sure if I could be much help. But about what time peroid would you like your story to take place? To me thats one of the most important factors to figure in before even getting ideas jotted down. But then again you probally already knew that. Christian morals with action, you may be surprize at how many people think that is impossible. Again, sorry I'm not much help.
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Life is but an empty dream!
For the soul is dead that slumbers,
and things are not what they seem.
Life is real! Life is earnest!
And the grave is not its goal;
Dust thou art; to dust returnest,
Was not spoken of the soul."
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Postby true_noir_chloe » Sun Apr 04, 2004 1:08 pm

That's a really broad question. ^_^ Have you written anything before? My first piece of advice might be to research by going to a Christian book store and finding a few books to read that are Christian action novels. They have them aplenty these days. Look in the teen section.

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You see into the deepest part of me ---

beyond the fog I hide behind.

You cast your light upon the shadows

that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.

You ease the pain when I am hurting,

and morbid visions from my past

pierce into the realm of Reason

as though I danced on blades of glass.

You grant me strength when I have fallen

and, once again, I've lost my way.

You take my hand in Yours and lead me

into the promise of a brand new day.

You bring order to all my chaos,

yet set my well-laid plans awry.

You place me on a firm foundation ---

then give me wings so I can fly.

You sand away my roughened edges

and polish all the dullest parts

until I stand before Your presence...

a newly-sculpted work of art.

You see into the heart within me,

right through my motives and selfish will.

And yet, in spite of all You see

You say You love me even still.


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Postby ice122985 » Thu Apr 08, 2004 10:44 am

blueraven wrote: But about what time peroid would you like your story to take place?


i was thinking either a present day with not so far off technology or far off future...which often serves as a stumbling block.
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Postby ice122985 » Thu Apr 08, 2004 10:45 am

thanks for the advice....i try to find some in a few days.
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Postby starstoryteller » Sun May 23, 2004 2:49 pm

How about a storyline where a character is generly a good person but who has douts about God's Divine Justice Kinda like "The Punsher" type Character and who does the Robin hood thing only he/she a hit men. Then he/or she
meets some one w/ Chirstain Morals (Bishie incoulded). XD :grin:
:comp: "Foul Beast"

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Postby c-girl » Sun May 23, 2004 2:57 pm

Hmmm.. I did come up with a christian story... It's hard to come up with one. When I say hard I mean real HARD. That's only my opnion though.
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Postby lonelyone » Sun May 23, 2004 3:08 pm

christiangirl wrote:Hmmm.. I did come up with a christian story... It's hard to come up with one. When I say hard I mean real HARD. That's only my opnion though.





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Postby starstoryteller » Mon May 24, 2004 4:39 pm

like lonlyone,blue raven, and ture_noir_chloe are saying read insparing books and whach insperaing moveis. You know those great movies that would be just perfect if it wern't for that one secen of sex or occltic thames...perfect them!!!!!
infuse it w/ the word of God :dance:
:comp: "Foul Beast"

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Postby Mave » Tue May 25, 2004 9:11 pm

I think it's 'do'-able. I haven't really had a problem infusing Christian morals into my stories so far. (I have lotsa stories and ideas actually but it takes such a long time to convert them into little manga pages, all inked and screentoned nicely. :bang:

anyway, apart from the good advice already given here, what I like to do is take current ideas available in the secular world and give them a Christian twist or present them from a Christian point of view.

Another thing I do is to ask myself, "what common Christian themes do I want to focus on?" Most of my stories, always often than now, are created from my inner desire to convey to the readers a specific Christian teaching. Once i know what my focus is, I start writing a story to communicate that common theme.

I could get into the specifics but perhaps, posting more details of your current ideas of your story may help us to help you. ^_^
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