The Island of C.A.A.

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The Island of C.A.A.

Postby Solid Ronin » Wed Mar 17, 2004 2:03 pm

A look of curiosity comes across San's face as he sees a very unfamiliar sight, a old styled Japanese house in the middle of the forset away from town. San who's in a black kimono vest along with some loose pants. Hanging down at his side are two kodachis. He enters the house with much caution to find nothing in the first room.

San: Hello?.?.?.Anyone home?.?.?.?.

Male voice: Over here

San quickly turns his head to the right where the voice came from.

San: Jet?

Jet: Yep..their sliding doors..or if ya cant find'em just punch through'em

San: heh

San open a door to revel Jet sitting and playing Final Fantasy ten-two. Jet has a "interesting" choice of clothing begin that they are all black. At the present time hes wearing cargo pants,short sleeve shirt,and a martial arts gi over it. His shoes are styled after work boots. Also he was a companion sword (a small katana) strapped around his waste.

San: I see you have electricity.

Jet: And pluming.

San sits down and watches Jet play.

San: We got orders.

Jet: From?

San: The Queen.

Jet drops the controller in surprise.

Jet: Let me see.

San pulls a piece of paper from his pocket and hands it to Jet. He reads it.

Jet: humph! A order to the C.A.A. reserve forces from the Queen...it seems a little..I dunno.

San: You think about it too much.

Jet: Your probably right.

San gets up.

San: Well lets go Fort Honshu is a few hour walk way.

Jet: Now?

San: Oh no they sent the order two weeks in advance...Yes now.

Jet: Fine

Jet gets up and goes to the main room. He then opens a drawer disguised as a part of the wall opposite of the door reveling his katana.

San enter the room.

San: You love that thing dont ya.

Jet: yep

Jet takes the katana and straps it around his waist. The blade is about three feet and seven inches. the scabbard and handel,which is a foot long, are both entirely black with the exception of crimson diamond shapes on the handel.

San: bet you feel like mister cool with all the black.

Jet: heh...yeah

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Ashley: Ok one more time

The queen of CAA at this time she is informed on the troll situation by her trusted knight Shatterheart.

Shatterheart: Trolls are already attacking Honshu fort and Captain Philo has reported another ship coming it.

Ashley: How many men do we have at Honshu?

Shatterheart: One hundred and fort-two and we have two reserve soldiers heading there now.. The Ronin of Kirai and Sangoku.

Ashley: Are they Special Operation Forces.

Satterheart: Yes.

Ashley: Well that’s good … and what of Omega’s Team

Shatterheart: They should be gathering at Fort Honshu now.

Ashley: And the G.F.R. project.

Shatterheart: I’m heading to the east after this meeting to foresee the progress personally

Ashley: Good….Is that all?

Shatterheart: Yes ma’am.

Ashley:Then if you don't mind, I'm going go pray. Excuse me.

Shatterheart: Yes ma’am.

Shatterheart left the room and Ashley began to pray.

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A officer of the C.A.A. defense army is getting some well deserved rest. He has a good build to him , a long black pony tail as well as some scars from battle each one with a different story to it, Although he never tells them. A young officer walks into the room.

Young officer: Sir? Are you awake?

Officer: I am now.

The officer gets up from his bed wearing only his boxers , well rested.

Young officer: Sorry to wake you , Sir . But you have orders from top brass.

The young officer gives the older officer a piece of paper. The officer extends his hand to grab the paper and reads it.

Officer: Ensign, From now on you will call me Omega.

Ensign: Yes , Omega

Omega put on his white Gi top and black Gi pants. And walked out of the room.

Omega: I’m going to Fort Honshu.

End.

Edit: WHOOPS! I made a HUGE error when Shatterheart said about Omega going to Kyoto...scrath that I ment to put Honshu..Forgive me.
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Postby Razgriz » Wed Mar 17, 2004 2:44 pm

keep up the good work, a nice bit of dialogue.
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Postby Solid Ronin » Wed Mar 17, 2004 2:51 pm

Thank man I guess I not going to commit seppukku now if someone likes it
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Postby cbwing0 » Wed Mar 17, 2004 3:25 pm

I like it...you're off to a good start. :)
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Postby Solid Ronin » Wed Mar 17, 2004 5:41 pm

Thank you my friend
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Postby Icarus » Wed Mar 17, 2004 10:07 pm

This will be interesting.
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Postby uc pseudonym » Thu Mar 18, 2004 5:33 am

Ah. Ignore my comment, I see this thread now. Interesting start.
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Postby Omega Amen » Thu Mar 18, 2004 4:38 pm

I just want to state for the record that my interest in this work has greatly heightened since the character Queen Ashley mentioned my character by name. I do not know why that is so, and I am guessing that detail has little importance... but it has increased my interest and eagerness for the next part. Maybe I just like that my character's name gets mentioned by the royalty. I am weird like that.

Keep up the good work.
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Postby Taslin_Jewel » Thu Mar 18, 2004 5:01 pm

This is getting interesting. Please write more soon!
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Postby Solid Ronin » Thu Mar 18, 2004 7:09 pm

Omega Amen wrote:I just want to state for the record that my interest in this work has greatly heightened since the character Queen Ashley mentioned my character by name. I do not know why that is so, and I am guessing that detail has little importance... but it has increased my interest and eagerness for the next part. Maybe I just like that my character's name gets mentioned by the royalty. I am weird like that.

Keep up the good work.


I dont want to spoil anything but Your character is going to do some major thing later on
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Character guide

Postby Solid Ronin » Thu Mar 18, 2004 7:17 pm

Jet = Ronin of Kirai
San = Sangoku
Philo = Old philosopher
Omega = Omega Amen

The rest like: Ashley and Shatterheart . Im sure you know of whom I speak
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Postby Locke » Thu Mar 18, 2004 8:00 pm

cool start to an already cool story XP
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Postby Knives » Fri Mar 26, 2004 4:36 am

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Postby Solid Ronin » Tue Mar 30, 2004 11:08 am

thank you the next chapter should be up today
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Postby uc pseudonym » Tue Mar 30, 2004 11:20 am

And I await it. Particularly due to your assurance my first roles have actually been planned soon.
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Postby Solid Ronin » Tue Mar 30, 2004 1:29 pm

Indeed, It is Master in fact im about to type your lines that you may edit them
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Postby Taslin_Jewel » Tue Mar 30, 2004 4:27 pm

I wait in excitement...
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Postby Solid Ronin » Tue Mar 30, 2004 4:47 pm

YAYZ a new reader!!!
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Postby Taslin_Jewel » Tue Mar 30, 2004 6:08 pm

What? You mean I haven't replied to this thread before now?

:forehead: I'm an idiot sometimes. Sorry, RoK, I've been reading it since the beginning. I guess I forgot to comment on it...
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Postby Solid Ronin » Tue Mar 30, 2004 6:31 pm

Taslin_Jewel wrote:What? You mean I haven't replied to this thread before now?

:forehead: I'm an idiot sometimes. Sorry, RoK, I've been reading it since the beginning. I guess I forgot to comment on it...


It's ok and your not an idiot. Also think your talking about the other thread on this topic the one that I used to get characters.
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Postby Inferno » Wed Mar 31, 2004 9:03 am

Man that was good! Keep writin!
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Postby Solid Ronin » Thu Apr 01, 2004 5:19 am

Thank you very much Im hoping to have the second part up today
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Postby Taslin_Jewel » Thu Apr 01, 2004 12:48 pm

Ronin of Kirai wrote:It's ok and your not an idiot. Also think your talking about the other thread on this topic the one that I used to get characters.

No, actually. I meant this one too. I can't wait until you post more!
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Postby Solid Ronin » Thu Apr 01, 2004 2:24 pm

Character Guide

Uc - Vincent
Cbwing0 - Shimron
Gzusrcks - Nellas
Noz - Straylight




San: So did you hear the rumor?

San and Jet walk down the streets of Honshu village their destination Fort Honshu. The village was very neat and filled with activity. Some people were cleaning their front lawns, gardening, or playing hand held video games all enjoying the sun which was shining like never before and a slight breeze made the day lovely and cool.

Jet: Which one?

San: The G.F.R. project…

Jet: I don’t think we could create something like that.

San: You know what it’s supposed to be?

Jet: No but it’s one of those things that if it were real it would be some horrible weapon of destruction or something like that.

San chuckled. Jet looked to the left and saw a girl with long brown hair relaxing in the sun while sitting on a chair in the front of what seemed to be her house.

Jet: There she is..

San: Hm?

Jet walked toward the girl ,San follows.

Jet: Neko-chan.

Neko rose from the chair and she and Jet bowed to one another.

Neko: Jet-san, How are you? And you, San-san?

Jet: I’m good, you?

San: good.

Neko: I’m ok… Umm are you two heading to the fort?

San: Yes.

Neko: So are the rest of us going to be alright?

Jet: Have we ever let anything happen to the village?

Neko laughed.

Neko: I guess not..Well I shouldn’t be keeping you so bye.

Jet: Heh… I’m the one who cam over to you remember bye.

San and Jet once again headed for Fort Honshu.

* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

Omega arrived at Fort Honshu on house back his cloths dirty from riding. The fort was massive and could hold three hundred men easily, for the population of the island it is quite large. Omega got off his horse and admired the fort from a short distance. After a good look he entered the fortress. The halls were massive with enough room for five men to stand side by side and still have a little room. After navigating his way though the fort he came into a room. It was a room for V.I.P. with stone walls and celling and marble floors. There he saw three people sitting by an oak table.

Two were male the other female. One of the men was about Omega’s height his hair was dark blond, short, and gelled in front. The girl was shorter and had a greenish color to her hair. The other man was shorter and wore the ninja dogi. Both the taller man and the girl wore the C.A.A. army uniform which was a light armor consisting of: Arm and Leg plates and a small chest plate.

Omega: Attention!

All rose and looked at Omega. He looked at the ninja.

Omega: You?

Locke: umm.. My names Locke ,Sir. The army hired me for my ninjutsu skills.

Omega: Sit.

Locke sat down feeling as if he did something wrong. Omega looked at the other man.

Omega: You?

Shimron: Lt. Shimron I'm whatever you need me to be ,Sir.

Omega: Good. Sit.

Shimron sat. Omega turned his attention to the girl.

Nellas: Lt. Nellas. I'm a archer and know several healing spells , Sir.

Omega: Good. Sit.

Nellas sat.

Omega: You are here to form a special task force of which I am in command. We will be ready for any operation at all times..

Locke raised his hand and Omega stopped.

Omega: Yes?

Locke: When you mean operations you mean thing like assassinations right?

Omega: Whatever top brass thinks is necessary.

Locke: Like assassinations?

Omega: If we are ordered to do so ,Yes.

Locke: Cool....what's top brass.

Omega sighed and thought.

Omega: What have I done to deserve this?

* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

To the north of Fort Honshu lies the Kyushu Mountains. On the summit, which was not very high but high enough to see the entire island, stood two men. One looked over the summit and saw Fort Honshu; he also saw the troll ships coming toward the fort. He looked from left to right and saw no other ships which was very odd. The man wore a black shirt under an unbuttoned martial arts jacket and loose gray pants. He was slender and had straight black hair.

Another man walked toward him and wore a long sleeve shirt, the sleeves were a bit too long for his arms and pants all black. He held at staff, with a Chinese dragon pattern, in his right hand the sign of a wizard.

Man in black: What is it, Vincent?

Vincent: Every ship is steadily approaching Honshu, ignoring every other target... the trolls are more organized than ever. Someone is leading them, Noz. They aren’t the animals they once were.

Noz: Your former student is there, yes?

Vincent: Yes, he lives on the outskirts of the town.

Noz: Go.

Vincent: How do you mean?

Noz: Go... you can still help the villagers if need be.

Vincent: Very well.

Vincent strapped his katana to his back and began to walk down a flight of stairs that was carved into the mountain side.

Noz: Let me be of some help.

Noz rose his staff, and the upmost part began to glow. A small round platform sharped undeneath Vincent's feet. The platform lifted him into the air and headed toward Honshu.
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thank you

Postby Solid Ronin » Thu Apr 01, 2004 2:31 pm

Id like to thank , Sangoku. Thanks man if you weren't my friend this entire story would fall apart
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Postby Taslin_Jewel » Thu Apr 01, 2004 2:33 pm

That was great! More, please.

EDIT: I don't necessarily mean now, but sometime soon!
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Postby Solid Ronin » Thu Apr 01, 2004 2:35 pm

Im sorry Taslin , but thats the end the island blows up...sorry...and Thank you
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Postby Razgriz » Thu Apr 01, 2004 2:40 pm

It's coming along great! Good development of storyline, and no thanks is necessary.
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Postby Solid Ronin » Thu Apr 01, 2004 3:04 pm

Of course its not necessary but I want to so thoug..lol
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Postby cbwing0 » Thu Apr 01, 2004 3:21 pm

The story is turning out very well. I especially like what you did with my character. :thumb:
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