My Psychotic Stuff ...

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My Psychotic Stuff ...

Postby Kenchii » Fri Jul 04, 2003 8:53 pm

Uhh, here are some of my poems.

Slipping Closer & Closer

As I enter the room covered with peers,
I am waiting for my assingment that lurks near.
As a cold breath blooms across me,
I turn around ever so solfly.
A silhouette of a demon I seen,
My thoghts were very keen.

He punished me with his jokes, and cruel laughure.
Things he said he thought he would get away with.
Everyday slipping closer and closer.
Disrespecting, unconrtolable jesters.
Everyday slipping closer and closer.

Til that day arived when a fist was throwed.
Brushed off my sholder, it hurt my bone.
Not taking permission to assult a friend,
He did it again, and again.

Two,three,four,more and more.
Anger rushes inside of me, fast and uncontrolably.
Thoughts of death follow up behind my head thinking swiftly.
"I can't let this go, I can't let this be." ,
As I thought so quietly.

Then I slip to another place in time and agree to let your control loose.
"This is the end of your games, the're will be no truse".
Grabing his head with the palm of my hand,
I take it and slam,slam,slam.
Brain cells begin to fry away,
I have thoughts of him dieing today.
Soon he grabs my arm and pulls away,
Walks back slowly,
Looking confused and empty.

Everyday slipping closer and closer,
that day came, and now its over.

By: Psycho_Kenchii
06/11/03


This one I won second place in the fair.

Billy

Remember me Billy?

When you made fun of me.

Remember me Billy?

When you pushed me around.

Remember me Billy?

When I broke into your house.

Remember me Billy?

When I grabed you by the throat.

Remember me Billy?

When I got out and didn't make a sound.

Remember me Billy?

When the cops came in and looked around.

Remember me Billy?

You can't remember Billy because...
They found your body dead on the ground.

By: Psycho_Kenchii
03/00/03
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Postby uc pseudonym » Mon Jul 07, 2003 10:46 am

:eyebrow:
Good work, if slightly disturbing. That isn't necessarily a bad thing. I'll read anything else you post.
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Postby snowyangel » Mon Jul 14, 2003 3:47 pm

whoa!!!...ok thats kind of scary..but still good
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Postby Kenchii » Tue Jul 15, 2003 3:27 pm

Eveyone is looking at me
Staring and blinking.
Eveyone just go away.
Cant get away, can I find what I am seeking?
Everyone just let me be...
I am going insane and there is evil in my head.
Please help me
I cant see
I am blind
Everyone just let me be.
Get out of my head.
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Postby uc pseudonym » Wed Jul 16, 2003 7:17 am

You didn't preface that last one by saying it was a poem... and I thought for a brief moment that you had some serious issues to work on. Of course, it's pretty easy to figure out it's poetry, so no harm done...
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Postby Kenchii » Wed Jul 16, 2003 10:29 am

Its not a poem...just words... hehe :hits_self
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Postby uc pseudonym » Wed Jul 16, 2003 2:17 pm

I'm going to ignore that comment.
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