Poem - "A Raindrop"

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Poem - "A Raindrop"

Postby Staci » Tue Mar 02, 2004 9:17 am

A Raindrop

I peer outside into gray
And watch gentle drops fall
From the blessed Heavens.
Each supple note of water mark
For heart-felt prayers muttered
Between my sleep's breath.

A raindrop for all kisses we share.

Emerge, new life, from winter vices
To bask in scintillant sunrays
And dance with fragrant breezes.
Innumerous flower petals greet senses
And aid the pure refreshment
Of this crimson soul.

A petal for all blushes we exchange.

Stroll along the Path of Life
With our hands forever interlocked,
Soul mate of mine.
One long stride to follow another
Toward monogamous bliss
Brought by forces not seen.

A step for all caresses we partake.

Utter unbreakable vows with joy
Because union is sought after
Through our twin glows.
Like bands offer physical chains
Between what stands in existence,
Symbolic and priceless.

A ring for all gazes we trade.

Emerge, timeless love, from depths
Immeasurable by even those around
Who understand it most.
Let soft light illuminate eyes
And quicken pulses of devoted lovers
For passion's one sake.

A cause for all thoughts we know.

I peer outside into gray
But see only the bright spectrum
Of our innocent love.
Time may tell our story well now
Since we have chosen the path
To destiny and beyond.

A raindrop for all that we are.
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Postby ShiroiHikari » Tue Mar 02, 2004 9:20 am

*__* That's so pretty~ Gah, your poetry is so good! <3
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Postby Staci » Tue Mar 02, 2004 11:09 am

ShiroiHikari wrote:*__* That's so pretty~ Gah, your poetry is so good! <3

Awwwwwwwwwwww! *turns three shades of red* Thank you very much. *~_~*


Psst... the only reason my poetry is so good is because I'm good at writing down my emotions on paper. Otherwise, I'd be a bum poet like most people. :sweat:
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Postby ShiroiHikari » Wed Mar 03, 2004 8:14 am

Yeah, somewhere along the line I lost all ability to put emotion on paper. o.o I wrote some poetry a few years ago, but I haven't done any since -_-;
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Postby churchgirl111 » Wed Mar 03, 2004 8:19 am

I agree!
Your poetry is very good and your emotions are very well portrayed!
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Postby Icarus » Wed Mar 03, 2004 11:50 am

Very, very, very nice.
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