MillyFan wrote:UC, seriously, you've made me a better writer.
uc pseudonym wrote:Volt... your post would be quite humorous if it wasn't so scarily true. In retrospect, I wish I would have posted an example of a bad fight scene.
Thanks, Mave. I'd be happy to answer any questions, or even cover any specific situations.
uc pseudonym wrote:No, you're considerably better than that (especially your newer work). Volt wasn't targeting you, in case you think he was. But I've read so much literature exactly like it (and I don't read that much fanfiction...).
I'm afraid it would be highly difficult for me to get a response to you at the moment, but such might be possible given enough time. At the moment things are hectic at my end, but when they settle down I think I would enjoy giving you feedback on how you write fighting.
Myoti wrote:I understand, and I wasn't meaning you specifically. I would simply appreciate it if anyone with more education and skill in writing would be able to help me.
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