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Postby HwaRang777 » Sat Feb 28, 2004 4:21 pm

Sorry if anyone recoginizes this from another post I wrote it the project forums, but if you could look at some of the stories I've written and give me your thoughts about the basic idea and tell me what I could write in this forum, please let me know:


[align=left] Summoner (7 part series)- A teen orphan finds himself to be the Neo Archangel that must fight in the epic war of Heaven and Hell.

Wheeler - A street life drama that shows the possible dark side of the street racing world and shows the reality of committed crimes and how many of them are intertwined with one another (if organized).

Moonlight (Spinoff of Summoner)- Reveals the dark history of Catherine Summers, a.k.a. Moonlight, ally of Summoner. Also, must find cure for witchcraft spell that’s controlling him.

Archangel War (Prequel to Summoner)-Reveals the history of the first Archangel War through the eyes of the first Archangel

Michael - A young man finds himself possessing the most strongest and most advanced form of military technology, but because of mystical powers from it, he becomes less self controlling and letting it take over him.

Lady Death- An immortal woman that has trained in all forms of the military arts to take revenge of her supposedly murdered fiancee

Forbidden Sonata- A sort of Romeo & Juliet theme but deals with the relations of two major Asian mafias, the Japanese and the Koreans.

Game Over- A young man that finds himself being the convoy of the living, story also deals with advancements in technology.

My Guardian Angel- A romantic comedy that has a girl find out that she really does have a guardian angel (physically) sorta get’s sad in the end.

Narration- tells the story of a young man that discovers the strength of writing and imagination (sort of like “The Never Ending Storyâ€
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Postby Mave » Sat Feb 28, 2004 5:19 pm

Ack...I replied to the last post.

http://www.christiananime.net/forums/showthread.php?t=4046&page=2

:sweat: Hopefully I didn't say anything offending with my comments, I meant well. ^^
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Postby true_noir_chloe » Sat Feb 28, 2004 7:00 pm

I responded in the other thread. Do you want us to comment on if we think any of these are good ideas, so that you can get started and put the most effort in the stories we think are best from your list? If that's what you'd like let me see.

I'm not into angel/demon stories, and the first five didn't catch my interest.

I agree with Mave's comments on the ones which sound interesting and such. The Degree in Parenting would make a fun shojo, but the baby could really crimp the character's style and romance. I think you should change it to a toddler, or something like that. Then, it might have better character interaction.

The Forbidden Sonata is kind of interesting.

I also don't really like military stories. So, my other pick would be the Yin/Yang story. I agree with Mave again, and think it would be more interesting if the main character was a girl this time, rather than a guy like in Ranma 1/2.

I hope I didn't offend either. I'm just particular about what I enjoy reading. You can write the other stories, but I'd be hard-pressed to make time to read them. I'm sure others here might like those sort of stories, though.

[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE


You see into the deepest part of me ---

beyond the fog I hide behind.

You cast your light upon the shadows

that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.

You ease the pain when I am hurting,

and morbid visions from my past

pierce into the realm of Reason

as though I danced on blades of glass.

You grant me strength when I have fallen

and, once again, I've lost my way.

You take my hand in Yours and lead me

into the promise of a brand new day.

You bring order to all my chaos,

yet set my well-laid plans awry.

You place me on a firm foundation ---

then give me wings so I can fly.

You sand away my roughened edges

and polish all the dullest parts

until I stand before Your presence...

a newly-sculpted work of art.

You see into the heart within me,

right through my motives and selfish will.

And yet, in spite of all You see

You say You love me even still.


~by D.M.~

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Postby HwaRang777 » Thu Mar 04, 2004 4:46 am

well I wanted replies for this post to help me become a more realistic and better writer. I understand that some of the stories either sound too clique or cheesy, but I really think some stories like "Summoner" should be published. But hey, that's my opinion. But yeah with the help of my fellow online christian allies, not only will I make a book that is believeable, but hopefully lead others to God (for some books). And then again, they may not be books, they could be graphic novels, which I'm not entirley sure how some things will work for that. But if anyone wants a "preview" of any story or would like to know if I have any more, just P.M. me and I'll either use a scene that I already made or make one up.
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