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Animation W.I.Ps (UPDATED)

PostPosted: Sun Feb 24, 2013 3:22 pm
by AnimeSpriter7.4
so this the animation i'm currently working on
critic would be nice
http://www.fileize.com/view/5b32ef4e-1ee/ (2/24/13)

http://www.fileize.com/view/04a4a427-1a1/ (2/27/13)
fixed lucarios instant show up in the beginnin; smooth out lucarios sneak attack back kick thingy

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ez37Tu__0X0 (3/30/13)
added sound effects and smooth it out a bit

also i don't know where to put my animations so i'll leave it here with the computer art and stuff

Re: Animation W.I.Ps (UPDATED)

PostPosted: Wed Feb 27, 2013 7:38 pm
by SilverToast
I can't critique it since I have no experience or knowledge of flash animation, but I think it looks really good. It reminds me of smbz.

Re: Animation W.I.Ps (UPDATED)

PostPosted: Sat Mar 02, 2013 4:48 pm
by AnimeSpriter7.4
thank you.
you don't have to know a thing about animating but is there something that you disliked. such as, was it to fast paced? what would be a nice touch to this animation? etc
i want to hear opinions, because i care...

Re: Animation W.I.Ps (UPDATED)

PostPosted: Mon Mar 04, 2013 9:01 pm
by SilverToast
I guess there need to be more sound effects added to complement the animation. When lucario kicks him there should be a hitting sound. Other than that I can't see anything else that needs to be improved.

Re: Animation W.I.Ps (UPDATED)

PostPosted: Sat Mar 30, 2013 2:41 pm
by AnimeSpriter7.4
i didn't get much time to work in this, but i hope it looks better than the first two.