A short film I made

Postby **The Last Bard** » Tue Jul 18, 2006 8:57 pm

Okay, I just firstly want to say, that I realize this isn't very impressive at all.
This is just a short video I filmed one night and editted.
So please, offer me any constructive criticism you can!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ou9_7_KZuC8 --- Click on the link.

It has very mild violence.

Postby **Bobtheduck** » Wed Jul 19, 2006 8:28 pm

Interesting. I've never been able to get people to cooperate for a serious movie... Nice, at least for a short.

Postby **ChristianKitsune** » Wed Jul 19, 2006 11:07 pm

OOH with Kansas Storm in the backround! NEATO! I like the effect!! was it real?!

Postby **Yojimbo** » Wed Jul 19, 2006 11:20 pm

I liked the shot of the sword with the "blood" dripping from it. On the constructive criticism side I think the sound of the rain and especially the wind should be a little more quiet when he's upstairs. Also I couldn't hear what the guy in the hat was really saying even with the volume up.

Postby **The Last Bard** » Sun Jul 23, 2006 5:07 pm

Thanks for the comments!

Yojimbo:

On the constructive criticism side I think the sound of the rain and especially the wind should be a little more quiet when he's upstairs. Also I couldn't hear what the guy in the hat was really saying even with the volume up.

Yeah, I really tried making it where you could hear him, but I think I got impatient, and just posted it as it was.

ChristianRonin:

OOH with Kansas Storm in the backround! NEATO! I like the effect!! was it real?!

No, I wasn't able to film it during an actual storm. I would've liked that a lot better too. haha

A short film I made

A short film I made

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