CAA: Christian Anime Alliance

Hope u likey. I'll post more when i get more written and typed!
Prologue
Three year old Isaac sat, with his thumb in his mouth, on the edge of his bed. He rocked back and forth a little and then started to bounce. After he got bored of that the slid off the bed and crawled over to a toy horse on the floor. His mother found him playing on the floor making noises as he crashed two horses into each other. “Isaac, you know what your father said. You have to be careful with your toys.â€

Not at all badly written. As the story goes further we'll see if it's my type.

Not bad. Better paragraphing would be good.

good so far... now to read more... wait im late for work. later ill read more. gota go now... real fast. bye

Technomancer wrote:Not bad. Better paragraphing would be good.

I don't think the board allows for paragraphing. The story I'm putting up right now lost all of it's paragraphing once I submitted it.

You have to reformat to get the story to work normally. I seperate my paragraphs by a blank line (and page breaks by three). You're correct in that you can't really tab it forward, but splitting it like this does help readability.