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Listen

PostPosted: Mon Jul 13, 2015 5:29 pm
by Wolfsong
A pain I can't express
The tension straining before me
My heart is beating and reason is crying
I wish I could close my ears
I wish I could close my heart

Its hard to hear from another's lips
Truth that will be denied
Listen as hurtful words are delivered
Listen because I can't turn away

Listen, can't you hear them?
Quiet tears falling behind you
Silence fills the space between
But can't you hear it?

Hear the screaming in the silence

Re: Listen

PostPosted: Wed Jul 22, 2015 12:33 pm
by TheAlbinoMoose
Very nice... I'm getting the feels. There needs to be a Like button. Also, the art/writing boards don't get the attention they deserve, and seem to be overlooked. And that's a shame, cause there are some nice things (like dis) here!

Re: Listen

PostPosted: Wed Jul 22, 2015 5:26 pm
by Wolfsong
TheAlbinoMoose wrote:Very nice... I'm getting the feels. There needs to be a Like button. Also, the art/writing boards don't get the attention they deserve, and seem to be overlooked. And that's a shame, cause there are some nice things (like dis) here!

Thanks AM. And yeah, I agree. A Like button would be nice.

Re: Listen

PostPosted: Wed Jul 22, 2015 5:44 pm
by Banana Lobster
Very nice, I'm not any good at writing poems. I understand what the intent behind the writing is (usually at least), but trying to get my thoughts out in a structured form like that is hard for me. Well done Wolf. :thumb: