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Eternal Time

Nighttime;
Liquid moonbeams trickle downward
To illumine a fragrant path.
Swishes of silk and slaps of slippers
Disturb the peaceful way.

Alone time;
The young Queen with wise gaze
Wrings her slender hands.
Her crimson garb matches personality,
Passion for whom she awaits.

Delicate time;
From shadowed trees steps a man
In silver armor, black cape.
His arms encircle his Queen's waist
And lips seek her neck.

Precious time;
She gasps and sinks against him,
Pleased at his timely arrival.
She turns in his grasp and smiles
As fingers touch his face.

Required time;
"Betrothed," he whispers respectfully
And kneels to kiss her hand.
"What is your bidding, my Queen,"
He asks with upturned eyes.

Memorable time;
"Sweep me away, gentle Knight,
From the darkness of dusk.
Bring me into a peaceful world lit
By our beating hearts."

Cherished time;
Smiles brighten as he scoops her up
And off toward private alcove.
True love beckons their alike souls
To become but one.

Eternal time;
One faithful Knight and a regal Queen,
Destined lovers, mates forever.
Entwined together by heart strings
Forged of metal and silk.

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Most impressive! That poem has excellent flow, and is very moving. You really put all your heart into it, that's what really matters. I give this poem two thumbs up. (I would give more but that's all I have, lol)

Woooooow. You're very good with words. How pretty ^_^ Show us more stuff

That poem was very beautiful; I'm with Shiroi, show us more stuff. Also, is your fiance now your husband? ^_^

Very romantic and in-the-moment.

Tres romantique! ^_^ Beautiful imagery.

How did you choose the date you set? I'm still considering dates for myself.

YesIExist wrote:How did you choose the date you set? I'm still considering dates for myself.

I love the poem!
I like the narrative style and the straight poetry flow (not metaphorical and stuff...can't sit for an hour to figure it out ^_^)
Please show more of your writings...