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Temptation

I have all I need
Love, food, shelter, and air to breathe.
What is it about him
That lures me into wanting to sin?
He would rock my world, make all things unstable
Everything would be brought on the table.
There is no future or hope in him
The ice I consider walking upon is indeed thin.
He makes my head spin
Yet I find myself keep coming back again
I have decided that with him I'll have no part.
Not over his waters without a chart.
I do not need another master over me to reign.
Not with someone whose feelings are feigned.
So again, I keep my distance and move away.
But right after me he comes, leaving sanity at bay.
What can you do
With a person without a clue?

Intriguing poem, YIE! Tell us a little about yourself.

Hmmm, I'm thinking the same thing as Shooraijin. It is a very expressive piece.

Hmm. Is it my writing style?

Well, I exist.

I serve as entertainment.

Some might wish to possess me, though no one can but Christ.

Your comment now further intrigues me. I'm trying to figure out where I've heard your name before. *lightbulb* Hi, I think I know you. I mean, I don't actually know you personally, but I think I know someone you know. Does that make sense? Probably not, but anyway, hi!:jump:

Please, write some more poems and then maybe we'll be able to get to know you better. YesIExist is a clever name, btw.

your poem was really cool. i enjoyed it very much.

Thanks

Hmm. Not inspired to write anything right now. Kinda tired.

I don't really write stories because it takes too much time.

Wheeeeee!!!

Hole-punching
Soul-crunching
I'm making no sense today
But with me, that's okay.

Looking at papers that caused
Fears and tears for many years
Wanting to please the instructor
But not knowing how
School papers
So important before
Just might be useless to me now
Not worth much anymore

Thought I'd throw in a few words here today
But I don't know where this is going anyway
So I'll shut up.

It's a funny thing
How so much planning
Can go into one day


Crap. There goes my shred of inspiration.

YesIExist wrote:It's a funny thing
How so much planning
Can go into one day


Crap. There goes my shred of inspiration.

Happens to the best of us.

lol hey your doing good
keep it up!
actually your screen name always intrigued me as well...interesting...*churchgirl111 ponder's meanwhile slipping into a vegetative state*
anways..i like your writing style and you have expressive poems that speak from your heart which is good! So keep it up and don't get discouraged!

...you poems have some sort of...emotion I can't explain...almost...confusion...

i agree...it is random yet structured...i think a good word might be chaotically happy...intrigued...interesting..

Thanks.
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What is it about me
That makes me
So appealing?
What am I now doing
That makes
Your heart start reeling?

Can't you see
I'm inaccessible?
Can't you see
I'm taken?
How can I
Make myself CLEAR
So messages
Are not mistaken?

Could it be stubborness
Maybe desperation, too
That persuades you to follow
And endlessly pursue?

Whatever it is
You wish to find
You likely
Won't find it here

To draw others close to yourself
You must know the person in the mirror.

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I have problems with rhythm.

Yeah, but they'll work out if you keep at it.

hey, did anyone ever notice how shoorajin's avatar looks like Citan Uzuki from Xenogears? Or how theres a Jelly right behind him?

Zarn Ishtare wrote:hey, did anyone ever notice how shoorajin's avatar looks like Citan Uzuki from Xenogears? Or how theres a Jelly right behind him?

What?

My cat is insane. "MWOW? MWOW? MWOW?"

She doesn't want to stay in the basement. She's a big baby!

Random thought.