CAA: Christian Anime Alliance

A boisterous call came from the front of the house. " Mother, mother!" As steps came up to the front shoji opened with a loud thud. A young girl with her long silky black hair floating as she ran into the house calling for her mother.
she turned toward the veranda to find her seating at a small table reading a scroll her head was down covering her elegant kimono with red and gold with the pattern of flames and on the back of it was a golden on of the phoenix clan, it was so beautiful she couldn't help staring for a moment until she remember what she was doing.
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i don't mean to sound rude or anything i truly truly don't....would you mind seperating into paragraphs it woulud make the story a little easier to read...Please don't take offense only making a suggestion..
God bless arigato

Interesting...Mythical,

I tried to put it into paragraphs but it seem this message board disappovors of paragrapgs.