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For Tyler

PostPosted: Thu Jan 08, 2004 4:38 pm
by Murphy
I trusted you with all my heart,
Now your lies tear me apart.
I loved a love pure and true,
Hurting myself to do whats best for you,
You never gave me what I wanted,
A friend for when I hurted.
I've spent so much emotion and so much time,
Only to discover your kindness was pantomime.
Never thankful for my sweat,
As I cried trying to forget.
Now I see it was all in vain,
You were the root of all my pain.
Here you stand without your mask,
Finished with your demonic task.
I thought of you as a friend,
But you only brought about my end.

For an old friend who i recently discovered was using me.

PostPosted: Thu Jan 08, 2004 7:20 pm
by Lochaber Axe
I haven't gone around to saying anything about your poems. I love them, the rhythm is awsome. Better than anything I could do myself. This one in particular is filled with emotion. Keep it up.

PostPosted: Thu Jan 08, 2004 7:23 pm
by Murphy
Wow. Thank you so much. *Beam*

PostPosted: Thu Jan 08, 2004 8:58 pm
by true_noir_chloe
This one is filled with so much emotion.:rock: I just love this one. I'm sorry for the hurt you went through to get to this point; but, you certainly make the best of it by writing the way you do. :) You, Icarus and convoybutterfly are such great young poets. It makes me look forward to the future of poetry.

PostPosted: Fri Jan 09, 2004 2:44 pm
by Murphy
true_noir_chloe wrote:It makes me look forward to the future of poetry.


Yeah we need another turn poets that is, for the last few decades it has been a majour scientific-era-thing. If we keep going the way we are everything will be chrome plated by the year 2020! Ew.

PostPosted: Fri Jan 09, 2004 10:03 pm
by Icarus
Murphy wrote:Yeah we need another turn poets that is, for the last few decades it has been a majour scientific-era-thing. If we keep going the way we are everything will be chrome plated by the year 2020! Ew.

As long as they don't do away with fantasy, I can live with chrome.

Murphy, good job as always.