CAA: Christian Anime Alliance

I'm writing another story and here is the begining tell me what you think?


A boisterous call came from the front of the house. " Mother, mother!" As steps came up to the front shoji opened with a loud thud. A young girl with her long silky black hair floating as she ran into the house calling for her mother she turned toward the veranda to find her seating at a small table reading a scroll her head was down covering her elegant kimono with red and gold with the pattern of flames and on the back of it was a golden on of the phoenix clan, it was so beautiful she couldn't help staring for a moment until she remember what she was doing.â€

Ameiko sipped her tea than set it down and looked at Mia sitting on her cushion anxiety to hear the story. “It was about ten years ago when I was taking my gempuku at the Kyuden Agasha with my self and nine shogun training for are final test I remember it so well.â€