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PostPosted: **Tue Jan 06, 2004 2:59 pm**

Cradling an unspoken fear,
Feel your time drawing near,
Reach your hands to the sky,
Release your hopeless sigh.

Youâ€™ve loved and hated,
Blessed and damned,
Yet were never sated,
Through you mountains demand.

Close your eyes and speak your peace,
Your powâ€™r begins to cease,
Beg on bended knee,
Surrounded by burning debris.

Youâ€™ve tortured and cradled,
With strength far beyond fabled,
Been life or death,
All in a breath.

Now you stand before your jury,
Sentenced and found guilty,
Plead for the only thing with worth;
The life that was yours from birth.

You were taken from your throne,
The only thing youâ€™ve ever known,
Now the joyous silver bells ring,
You are gone my hollow king.

For Jaimie.

PostPosted: **Tue Jan 06, 2004 4:07 pm**

Geez ashlynn.. I'm so jealous of your poem writing skills. your poems have so much emotion and almost a hidden feeling that could only be interpreted by you.. at the same time, your poems almost hold the power of many interpretations, making them very songlike and inspiring. I really am glad your getting into that advanced writing class.. it will do you so much good.. AISHITARU!

PostPosted: **Tue Jan 06, 2004 4:12 pm**

Oh my gosh Lauren-chan thank you so much! I can't believe I am actully going into a senior class! AHHH! I think it is also an AP class! Wowwie!

PostPosted: **Tue Jan 06, 2004 7:16 pm**

Whenever I read or listen to something this great I have to cry.

You're writing gets better every time I read it.

PostPosted: **Tue Jan 06, 2004 11:05 pm**

Putting my jaw back together this many times can't be good for it. Otherwise, keep up the good work.

PostPosted: **Wed Jan 07, 2004 3:55 pm**

[color=darkred] wow! Thank you guys soooo much! ^^ I feel so special1[/color]

PostPosted: **Wed Jan 07, 2004 10:21 pm**

This is quite good... I got a little chill on the last line. May we know the story behind this piece... please? :lick:

PostPosted: **Thu Jan 08, 2004 2:35 pm**

EireWolf wrote:This is quite good... I got a little chill on the last line. May we know the story behind this piece... please?

Jaimie is my biological father and he has been playing with my emotions for far too long telling me he wants to be a part of my life then not speaking to me for three years then calling me drunk and bitching me out(excuse please but hey its the truth) so yeah i am not allowing him to have that power over me anymore.

PostPosted: **Fri Jan 09, 2004 9:20 pm**

Murphy wrote:Jaimie is my biological father and he has been playing with my emotions for far too long telling me he wants to be a part of my life then not speaking to me for three years then calling me drunk and bitching me out(excuse please but hey its the truth) so yeah i am not allowing him to have that power over me anymore.

Good for you. Thanks for sharing this with us. :hug:

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My Hollow King

My Hollow King