CAA: Christian Anime Alliance

Seeing as how i haven't contributed to this section in a while, i though i should grace you all with my presence!! j/k Anyways, I had a little blurb i thought i'd share with u guys. (sorry about and grammar mistakes, etc.) Comments and critiques are VERY welcome. And if anybody likes it there might be more to come.
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I suppose it was inevitable. Humanity has always tried to play God in one form or another. Is it really that surprising? We were so rebellious… But no one, not even those who knew we would be punished, expected this. And sometimes I wonder, could things have been different?



I still remember that day…

“Hey, kid. This is our turf, so get out!â€

Oops!! Sorry, i had it all in paragraphs but it looks like it's not anymore. Sorry bout that!

I love the name, Hope. I come from a long line of Hopes. Really. I even thought of using it for a pen name.

That being said I'll do the critique.... Nah, wait. I don't want to critique yet. I want to see what else you have to write. Would you mind adding some stuff? I'd like to see where this story goes first. I'll also go to your thread for choosing a name and put in my two cents. Is the name you're searching for, for the guy who's getting stabbed and kicked around in this story?

Sorry, I'm in a goofy mood right now. I do like your story so far.^_^ Please, write on.

Thank you alll!! I'm in the process of writing more! ^_^ Yep, this is the guy, only he's younger here. I really appreciate the comments! Oh, and thank you about my name! I know a few other Hope's myself.

Sorry it took so long! OH and This is copyright to ************** 2004

In the year 2130 AD, we created our own down fall. Kind of ironic, isn’t it? We were trying to create the perfect human being. But stop right there, you see that word? Create? Whoa, the only thing that comes from us trying to do God’s work is complete and utter havoc. And that’s just what happened. Sydoneis, the perfect human being. But we have another word problem. Perfect human being? Definitely not possible. We flubbed and it cost over half the population their lives. Sydoneis is superior in mental aspects, physical aspects, heck, it’s just about perfect! But, it’s not. And that’s out problem. To top it off, because it produces asexually it has multiplied by the thousands. It is slower to reproduce then say, bacteria, but not slow enough to give us time to see what it was doing. We nuked our own cities to try to get rid of it but we only ended up destroying our own people. Finally, three years after this disaster began, some scientists came up with chemical that repelled the now numerous Sydoneis. Acoxylate would do them no harm, but it would at least repel them from wherever it was sprayed. One problem (isn’t there always one problem). The Sydonis are slowly developing an immunity to Acoxylate. The government is in too much of a frenzy over the Sydonis to deal with the violence and crime running rampant in the streets. My name is Riven Graey. I’ve lived my whole life in fear. Fear of the Sydonis and fear of someone finding out what I’ve so carefully tried to hide. This is my story.

“Riven, RIVEN!â€

Hmm, sounds good so far :]

I like it. ^_^