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The Christmas Season - a poem
PostPosted: Sat Dec 20, 2003 1:44 pm
by true_noir_chloe
I wrote this in 1988 in my writing journal at the time. I just found this notebook and since its Christmas I thought I'd share it here. I know it's pretty rough, but then I'm not a poet.^_^
The Christmas Season
I know the air,
it is crisp and fresh.
I know the colors,
red, yellow, orange and green.
I know the sounds,
bells ringing and rustling of leaves.
I know the smell,
cooking with cinnamon and nutmeg.
I know the sights,
delightful with lights.
I know the flavor,
fresh pies, cider and nog
and I know,
the gift - my Lord and Saviour.
I know the reason,
for the Christmas season.
PostPosted: Sat Dec 20, 2003 1:51 pm
by Kesshin
Cool, Valerie.
PostPosted: Sat Dec 20, 2003 2:34 pm
by Razgriz
Great imagery! I like it
PostPosted: Sat Dec 20, 2003 5:52 pm
by true_noir_chloe
Urgh, I just read it again. This is definitely something I wrote 15 years ago. *hehe* Thanks for the comments guys - you're being too nice.
PostPosted: Sat Dec 20, 2003 9:28 pm
by Icarus
What would happen if you rewrote it now?
It expresses a nice sentiment, though, and conjures thoughts of the season quite well.
PostPosted: Sat Dec 20, 2003 11:08 pm
by true_noir_chloe
I didn't really want to rewrite it. Did you mean "now" and not "mow?" Thanks, Icarus. ^-~
PostPosted: Sat Dec 20, 2003 11:38 pm
by Icarus
true_noir_chloe wrote:I didn't really want to rewrite it. Did you mean "now" and not "mow?" Thanks, Icarus. ^-~
Yes, I did. *editing* Your quite welcome, as always.
PostPosted: Sun Dec 21, 2003 9:07 pm
by EireWolf
Yay, Christmas! (I'm feeling better about Christmas now... not so frazzled anymore.)
Merry Christmas!
PostPosted: Sun Dec 21, 2003 11:13 pm
by true_noir_chloe
Merry Christmas, Eirewolf! *hugs* ^_^ You must be borrowing someones computer. *hehe*
PostPosted: Mon Dec 22, 2003 8:01 pm
by Spiritsword
I like the poem, chloe, but somehow it doesn't resonate with me here in Central IL.
The color of Christmas here is white, and there are no leaves left to rustle. It's interesting what Christmas brings to mind in different regions, but there are some aspects of it that are universal. That's why I enjoyed the ending of your poem.
PostPosted: Mon Dec 22, 2003 9:53 pm
by true_noir_chloe
Thanks, Spiritsword. ^^ A white Christmas would be nice. I've always lived in brown Christmas regions. In California, Christmas is actually like fall in Texas.