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My Knight
PostPosted: Fri Dec 19, 2003 8:03 pm
by Murphy
i used to think that all who were kind,
had left the world and me behind.
when all the glaring and superior eyes,
finally brought me to the edge of demise,
i found a vision of hope and light,
there stood my knight.
unsuspecting and unseemly,
yet deep down i know it to be.
in a time when chivalary was commonly dead,
i was brought to life with a few soft words he said,
my life,
my light,
my knight.
yea
PostPosted: Fri Dec 19, 2003 8:32 pm
by Dirge
WOW! that is sooo cool ashlynn-chan.. Its so touching and sweet and stuff.. wow.. I really like it.. I wish I was all poetic like yooouu!! :E
whoever you wrote about..should feel.. warm and fuzzy inside..yes. the warm-ness and fuzzy-ness should be overwhelming him right now.
PostPosted: Fri Dec 19, 2003 8:37 pm
by Murphy
wow self-esteem it sky-rockets!
PostPosted: Fri Dec 19, 2003 11:07 pm
by Icarus
*Rehinges jaw*
PostPosted: Sat Dec 20, 2003 1:09 am
by true_noir_chloe
Thank you for writing another one of your poems. It's a great one. ^_^ I really liked this part:
>>when all the glaring and superior eyes,
finally brought me to the edge of demise,
Good stuff. ~-^
PostPosted: Mon Dec 22, 2003 5:29 pm
by Murphy
Is your jaw being dropped good or bad?
PostPosted: Mon Dec 22, 2003 7:55 pm
by Spiritsword
Very nice poem, Murphy. Very sweet and touching.
PostPosted: Mon Dec 22, 2003 11:24 pm
by Icarus
Murphy wrote:Is your jaw being dropped good or bad?
Good is an understatement.
PostPosted: Sat Dec 27, 2003 6:10 pm
by Murphy
I feel so special! yay!!!!!!!
PostPosted: Sat Dec 27, 2003 7:14 pm
by Spencer
Groovy, really deep-like and all the jazz.
PostPosted: Sat Dec 27, 2003 9:16 pm
by Murphy
well this is grand everyone likes it! I feel so...special!