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Another Day in Life

PostPosted: Fri Dec 05, 2003 1:30 pm
by Heaven's Cloud
Alright here's a play that I am writing. These are the first two scenes:

-Scene 001-

A kid named Matthew sits in his room talking to himself about his homework, and how frustrated he is on it.

Matthew: “I can’t figure this problem out!â€

PostPosted: Fri Dec 05, 2003 2:36 pm
by Razgriz
Very interesting I must say...I think it's good, are you planning to take this further?

PostPosted: Fri Dec 05, 2003 2:48 pm
by Heaven's Cloud
I don't know, but I will be writing more in a short period of time.

PostPosted: Fri Dec 05, 2003 5:31 pm
by Heaven's Cloud
-Scene 003-

Matthew’s Teacher: “Did anyone finish their war assignment?â€

PostPosted: Fri Dec 05, 2003 11:02 pm
by true_noir_chloe
I think you have a great idea. I think it would be great if you were a little more descriptive on where everyone is in the story. I'll pm you later since I'm about to log off. Good job so far.^-~