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Don't worry this won't be too sad...more reflection

The Final Bullet

I have carried this cross for a long time now
Did i ever truly believe in you?
Now death has come to claim me
Will you forgive me?

My life source of this temporary body flows free
and here i am repenting
at death realizing what it is
what it means to truly carry the cross

My life passes before me
Milly how i will miss you
i'm sorry for leaving
Forgive me
Please remember not what i have done
Remember please my words
the words of Life even if i did not chose until now

Death come and take me
i am forgiven and i give myself to him
For with death's final bullet i was made free
Milly i shall see you soon
I'll be waiting
I'll be waiting with a warm embrace

I don't really know poetry or remember Trigun, but I liked your poem.

T.T I love wolfwood! this poem so suits him
::sobs uncontrollably::
the worst part when he died, his final words were "I didnt want to die this way"
::hugs a little homemade doll of wolfwood, suddenly stops sobbing, and continues everyday life::
twas a good poem

haha...i agree...i was tearing up on that part..specially when he was seeking forgiveness...SOBS* Okay i'm okay....Thanks for the feedback I appreciate all the feedback i can get