Tomb Raider: The Temple of the Phoenix

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Tomb Raider: The Temple of the Phoenix

Postby Fsiphskilm » Sat Nov 01, 2003 12:15 am

Slowly walking
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I'm leaving CAA perminantly. i've wanted to do this for a long time but I've never gathered the courage to let go.
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Postby Shao Feng-Li » Sat Nov 01, 2003 3:23 pm

sweeet! man that' the first TR story ive ever read! i used to play the game all time!
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Postby true_noir_chloe » Tue Nov 04, 2003 10:41 am

You are such a promising young writer. :thumb: Great thoughts and action. You know your Tomb Raider, one of my all-time favorite games. Keep shining SouthernSun, and all the a.k.a.'s which follow you. :)

[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE


You see into the deepest part of me ---

beyond the fog I hide behind.

You cast your light upon the shadows

that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.

You ease the pain when I am hurting,

and morbid visions from my past

pierce into the realm of Reason

as though I danced on blades of glass.

You grant me strength when I have fallen

and, once again, I've lost my way.

You take my hand in Yours and lead me

into the promise of a brand new day.

You bring order to all my chaos,

yet set my well-laid plans awry.

You place me on a firm foundation ---

then give me wings so I can fly.

You sand away my roughened edges

and polish all the dullest parts

until I stand before Your presence...

a newly-sculpted work of art.

You see into the heart within me,

right through my motives and selfish will.

And yet, in spite of all You see

You say You love me even still.


~by D.M.~

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