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poem about Vash!!

PostPosted: Thu Oct 23, 2003 8:03 pm
by churchgirl111
I'm feeling poetic today.... :sweat:

Rem

Why did you go?
It does not matter
I hear your song
It echoes in my head
It is my very being
They are out to destroy me
They are out to destroy you
Why must you leave?

Gun's that will never be stained with the death of man
A barrel that is guided
scars and memories
happy, sad

Why did you have to leave?
It does not matter
I hear your song
That proclaims peace and love
That is what i shall live by
For you that is how i shall live

I believe this is what Vash must have felt when Rem died, but he wanted to live for what she believed in, adopting it as his own...This is about his decision to not kill and to have love and peace for all! KAWAII Vash!


For God so loved the world that he gave his only Begotten son, that whosoever believeth in him shall not perish but have everlasting life-John 3:16

If not now then when, if not me then who?-anonymous
They can't destroy Love
Nor will they ever

PostPosted: Fri Oct 24, 2003 8:04 pm
by VashTheStampede
Aww! I like the poem, it is very compassionate! :thumb: keep up the good work. Gee, I wish I could write poems......

;)

PostPosted: Fri Oct 24, 2003 8:11 pm
by churchgirl111
Thanks Vash the Stampede!!!
LOVE AND PEACE :)

PostPosted: Fri Oct 24, 2003 8:49 pm
by Haibane Shadsie
Pretty. One nitpick... I don't think you need the apostrophe on "Guns".

(I'm more of a prose writer than a poet, myself... so I'm not sure who I am to give crits and praise on poetry).

PostPosted: Sun Oct 26, 2003 7:16 pm
by churchgirl111
oops didn't mean to do a apostrophe...
Bad,bad,bad!!! :)