poem about Vash!!

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poem about Vash!!

Postby churchgirl111 » Thu Oct 23, 2003 8:03 pm

I'm feeling poetic today.... :sweat:

Rem

Why did you go?
It does not matter
I hear your song
It echoes in my head
It is my very being
They are out to destroy me
They are out to destroy you
Why must you leave?

Gun's that will never be stained with the death of man
A barrel that is guided
scars and memories
happy, sad

Why did you have to leave?
It does not matter
I hear your song
That proclaims peace and love
That is what i shall live by
For you that is how i shall live

I believe this is what Vash must have felt when Rem died, but he wanted to live for what she believed in, adopting it as his own...This is about his decision to not kill and to have love and peace for all! KAWAII Vash!


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Postby VashTheStampede » Fri Oct 24, 2003 8:04 pm

Aww! I like the poem, it is very compassionate! :thumb: keep up the good work. Gee, I wish I could write poems......

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I felt Your hands move mine aside, as those nails were driven down [[color=Gold]†][/color]
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"Be not overcome of evil, but overcome evil with good." Romans 12:21

"And now abide faith, hope, love, these three; but the greatest of these is love." 1 Corinthians 13:13

"But he was pierced for our transgressions, he was crushed for our iniquities; the punishment that brought us peace was upon him, and by his wounds we are healed." Isaiah 53:5 (NIV)

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Postby churchgirl111 » Fri Oct 24, 2003 8:11 pm

Thanks Vash the Stampede!!!
LOVE AND PEACE :)
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Postby Haibane Shadsie » Fri Oct 24, 2003 8:49 pm

Pretty. One nitpick... I don't think you need the apostrophe on "Guns".

(I'm more of a prose writer than a poet, myself... so I'm not sure who I am to give crits and praise on poetry).
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Postby churchgirl111 » Sun Oct 26, 2003 7:16 pm

oops didn't mean to do a apostrophe...
Bad,bad,bad!!! :)
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