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this is a poem about rurouni kenshin

PostPosted: Thu Oct 23, 2003 7:37 pm
by churchgirl111
[INDENT]In the days of reconciliation

Bladed past
scar burning crimson red
bile tasting death
a river of crimson
eyes glowing red
in the days of youth
death is the master
a force of sword and scar

repentence
heartache and revenge
smiles that are fleeting
tears that seem neverending
When will it be done?
How long must it go on?
Freedom


This is about what i feel kenshin must have going through his mind reconciling with his past...i'm going to write one of what would have happened had he maybe been a Christian that will probably be later....

PostPosted: Thu Oct 23, 2003 7:39 pm
by Razgriz
Very emotionally charged IMO, I like it. :thumb:

PostPosted: Thu Oct 23, 2003 7:57 pm
by true_noir_chloe
Very nice. :thumb: I liked it. :)