poem- untitled and inspired ^^

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poem- untitled and inspired ^^

Postby girlninja » Mon Apr 25, 2005 7:30 pm

Swirling paths
so full of thickets
prick the skin
overcome the soul
cause the wayward son to fall

Mud is thick in this sewage spill
Forsaken and forgotten
can we really get up again?
Does he see the few so small
that the world passes them by with upturned noses?

The lion of Judah devoured
took the mud and purifed
a living wave of redemption
washes the dirt and grime
freedom sublime
"If not now then when? If not me then who?-anonymous

and of course now i must instill the Dancing BANANA'S!
:dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance:

WHY AM I CRYING IN FRENCH-Vash the Stampede

ORORORORORO!-Himura Kenshin

:jump: :lol: :thumb:

"It is not weak to value human life!"-Raiden, Mortal Combat II

98% of the teenage population does or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature.

*ADOPTED BY* ..yea i know scary I got a adopted ~_^

Nami
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Postby Angel37 » Mon Apr 25, 2005 7:34 pm

Love it! Awesome symbolism!
<3 Angel
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Postby girlninja » Mon Apr 25, 2005 7:44 pm

awww thankyou ^^
"If not now then when? If not me then who?-anonymous

and of course now i must instill the Dancing BANANA'S!
:dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance:

WHY AM I CRYING IN FRENCH-Vash the Stampede

ORORORORORO!-Himura Kenshin

:jump: :lol: :thumb:

"It is not weak to value human life!"-Raiden, Mortal Combat II

98% of the teenage population does or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature.

*ADOPTED BY* ..yea i know scary I got a adopted ~_^

Nami
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Joined: Sat Dec 25, 2004 3:03 pm
Location: On the rooftops *ninja poofing*


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