CAA: Christian Anime Alliance

True Talent

(OK! I know this story is really long.. and i apologize for that.. but yah.. Its a great story (so i have been told by my friends who critique it) so i thought i would share it with you lovely ppl!! I won't give anything away..but if anyone of you like art.. you will love this!! ^_^ ENJOY! and PLEASE Comment!! I love feedback, both good and bad! ^_^ )

Have you ever heard of those “underdog storiesâ€

“Wowâ€

“Val, what’s gotten into you?â€

The weekend went by slowly. Faith and I spent it watching DVDs. Her parents were away on a business trip, so she stayed with my family and me. We were both excited for Monday, and were pretty much on edge until then.
Finally, Monday afternoon came. Mr. Steve was giving us last-minute instructions on what to do. When everything was understood and the bell rang, we all met in the commons area, and met for some last-minute instructions via Brendan.
“Valerie, you and Kyle will begin by painting the outline for the facial features. Faith and I will come in with color, and then all of us will shade, and all of us will work on the background. Does that sound fair, everyone?â€

Aside from some grammatical errors (I am such an English freak) it was good. Very original. Good job !

Yumie wrote:Aside from some grammatical errors (I am such an English freak) it was good. Very original. Good job !

It has grammatical errors?! Wow.. My English teacher even proofread it for me.... O.o hmm oh well! Thanks! ^_^;;;

Very nice, CR-chan! Your narrative style is very informal, which suits the subject matter well. And the characters were pretty good as well. Please post some more of your writing

Steeltemplar wrote:Very nice, CR-chan! Your narrative style is very informal, which suits the subject matter well. And the characters were pretty good as well. Please post some more of your writing

Thanks!! ^_^! I appreciate that!! I love these characters...i draw them the most..

I am in the process of of another story.. it is a sci fi.. but i am still working on the plotlines.. and yes SteelTemplar.. there is more violence in it..at least that is what i plan.. i know how you guys love your action! (me too!)

It has grammatical errors?! Wow.. My English teacher even proofread it for me.... O.o hmm oh well! Thanks! ^_^;;;

Yeah, for instance, "I rolled my eyes because his “Everyone of You is an Artist,â€

[quote="Yumie"]Yeah, for instance, "I rolled my eyes because his “Everyone of You is an Artist,â€

0_o Wow.. that was Awesome!!!!! I lovered it!

*o* *_* *-* ^-^ ^_^ ^o^ Thank you NAMI IMOTO CHAN!

yay this is great and i've already told you this but i'll say it again, dont show me ur char's you drew and then use them for char's in a story i just knew that kyle was blind when i learned his name sorry if i'm sounding angry but hey i needed something to put since you commanded me to post here ^^ its an awsome story keep writing in the stick monkey chronicels though

I didn't know yo uwanted to read this story, myth! And you...flipped through my sketch book before I could stop you! *sooooob*

Ok, to make it up to you I will finish another chapter by next weekend!

you let me look at your sketch book i didnt purposly do it. well sorta but not really but sorta. YAAAAAAY!

mythmaster wrote:you let me look at your sketch book i didnt purposly do it. well sorta but not really but sorta. YAAAAAAY!

Hmm... you could have said no...but then I probably would have cried..

I KID! Sorry, I ruined it for you...

dont worry you didnt ruin it at all

Ok!