Dragon Engine
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Dragon Engine
This will be a great story. It begins now. O.O
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Fireproof - Posts: 643
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Same with me. Can't open it. Would like to read it, tho.
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[Quote=Photosoph]Well, t'was a good deduction, Mr. Holmes! *salutes Mr. Myoti Sherlock Homes* [/QUOTE]
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[Quote=Photosoph]Well, t'was a good deduction, Mr. Holmes! *salutes Mr. Myoti Sherlock Homes* [/QUOTE]
Myoti wrote:Elementary, my dear Watsoph. XD
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Photosoph - Posts: 1528
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That is better; I can actually open the attachment now.
It is a bit difficult to make any meaningful comments on such a small amount of material, so I will simply note that I found this beginning interesting enough that I will continue to read should you post any more of it.
It is a bit difficult to make any meaningful comments on such a small amount of material, so I will simply note that I found this beginning interesting enough that I will continue to read should you post any more of it.
Let others believe in the God who brings men to trial and judges them. I shall cling to the God who resurrects the dead.
-St. Nikolai Velimirovich
MAL
-St. Nikolai Velimirovich
MAL
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Kaori - Posts: 1463
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Cool! I liked what you've written so far. Would be cool to see more. 
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[Quote=Photosoph]Well, t'was a good deduction, Mr. Holmes! *salutes Mr. Myoti Sherlock Homes* [/QUOTE]
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[Quote=Photosoph]Well, t'was a good deduction, Mr. Holmes! *salutes Mr. Myoti Sherlock Homes* [/QUOTE]
Myoti wrote:Elementary, my dear Watsoph. XD
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Photosoph - Posts: 1528
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bigsleepj wrote:Cons:
• Too short for its own good. Make it 20x longer.I take it this is part of a larger story. If so I'm looking forward to it.
This is only the beginning. I want this to be at least 50 pages long in the end, probably more. Like 300 more. Hmm... Speaking of "more," I'll write some more tonight. Expect another page to a page and a half.
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