poem about Yahiko ^^

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poem about Yahiko ^^

Postby girlninja » Mon Jan 17, 2005 5:11 am

Lost in the Days of the Past-a young samurai spirit

IN the days of an era of change
where the darkened streets
ravaged by blood and misery
now appear clean
the corrupt still rule

A samurai's spirit
stuck in a era that has no place
that has no honor
that chooses to forget the horror
and replace it with more
he waits

This samurai has been spared however
for now he does not have to pick up a sword
ravaged by blood, ravaged by death
but rather picks up a sword of life
swinging it's victorious blade
giving peace to cover the war
he contains the samurai's spirit
the warrior's hand
the human's heart

there ya go hope you like ^^
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Postby dareiq s'an » Mon Jan 17, 2005 6:58 am

yeah...it's pretty good
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Postby haru_bay_nay » Tue Jan 25, 2005 5:32 pm

Cool! I like it! Yahiko's not my fave RK character, but I like him. Write another poem some time! ^_^
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Postby Yeshua-Knight » Thu Jan 27, 2005 12:12 pm

well done, it suits him perfectly, if you decide to make it any longer you might want to mention something about him being more of a man as a child than his opposers would ever be
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Postby girlninja » Sat Jan 29, 2005 7:21 pm

Yeshua-Knight wrote:well done, it suits him perfectly, if you decide to make it any longer you might want to mention something about him being more of a man as a child than his opposers would ever be



thanks for the suggestion i'll do that ^^
"If not now then when? If not me then who?-anonymous

and of course now i must instill the Dancing BANANA'S!
:dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance:

WHY AM I CRYING IN FRENCH-Vash the Stampede

ORORORORORO!-Himura Kenshin

:jump: :lol: :thumb:

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Postby Yeshua-Knight » Sat Jan 29, 2005 9:50 pm

just let me know when you have a finished product if you decide to do that and i'll see about putting it on a good yahiko pic like it did with a rurouni kenshin poem
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