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Voice of the Lost

PostPosted: Wed Dec 29, 2004 5:31 pm
by sonichiro
hi! i wrote this a couple of years ago when i was depressed, but God pulled me out of depression shortly after and i'm full of the joy of the holy spirit! it has a message so i thought i would post it. ^__^
Shall i deny the giver of life
Rebuke that spirit stand up and fight
Woe to the dead and praise to the life
Follow the voice and forget your strife
It is coming, the time we've all craved
The book has been opened judgement to the grave

I'm falling again, God take my hand
I'm lost and crying out in vain
Lord hear my call, before i fall
Father i'm so lost, rescue me

I'm drowning in lakes of uncertanty
The lies and the hate are too much for me
I'm crying and praying for souls lost in fear
Their voices too hurt, only i hear
I'll speak for you, you will be heard in the end
Your warnings of truth to the world i will send

I'm falling again, God take my hand
I'm lost and crying out in vain
Lord hear my call, before i fall
Father i'm so lost, rescue me

Waves of depression choke at my throat
Screaming inside, praying to float
Walking threw waters consumed by tears
Follow the light, forget your fears
Voices echo inside my head
God give me life, don't leave me for dead

PostPosted: Thu Dec 30, 2004 2:47 pm
by Magekind
Very nice.

PostPosted: Thu Dec 30, 2004 3:42 pm
by sanitysux13
Dude, that's awesome. If you play music, or know someone who does, you should try to make that into a song.

PostPosted: Thu Dec 30, 2004 6:24 pm
by sonichiro
thanks, i've been thinking of making them song lyrics.....i'm still not sure yet tho. ^__^

PostPosted: Thu Dec 30, 2004 11:26 pm
by Cedahlia
That was wonderful! ^__^ You have alot of talent! And that would make a wonderful song.

PostPosted: Sun Jan 02, 2005 11:05 am
by girlninja
heh thinkin on the same for the song lyrics i think it would go well with alternative music if you like that sorta thing ^^
also beautiful poem i also understand teh grips of depression, how hard they are to overcome and how they sometimes come to grip again ^^ but i do wish you to keep writing poems that God has given you the new hope to write ^^ Out of our mouths ring his joyous Praise ^^ keep writing!

PostPosted: Sun Jan 02, 2005 1:18 pm
by sonichiro
^__^

PostPosted: Sun Jan 02, 2005 7:28 pm
by LostChild
i agree, great song lyrics! when/ if it ever gets made into a song, let me know, k? :thumb:

PostPosted: Sun Jan 02, 2005 9:09 pm
by sonichiro
sure thing! there actually is one more verse to this thing but i can't find the origional copy of it!! i posted this from memory and decided not to add the last verse because i couldnt find the sheet, now i really wanna post the rest of it!

PostPosted: Mon Jan 03, 2005 9:46 pm
by LostChild
well, when u find it, post it ASAP!!!! ^ ^ i can't wait!