"Tears"

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"Tears"

Postby LostChild » Thu Dec 23, 2004 1:09 am

Tears


So often am I sad,
Yet seldom do I cry.
I don’t know what I have,
But do I have any tears?

What is sadness?
I know it’s not a toy.
But must I show my feelings,
Like everyone else, physically?

Life is a treasure, yes,
But how is it a treasure when I can’t be myself?
At movies, books and plays I do “fog-upâ€
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Postby sonichiro » Tue Dec 28, 2004 4:39 pm

good job, i enjoyed that!
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Postby true_noir_chloe » Tue Dec 28, 2004 9:26 pm

T_T that's a sad poem. I thought it was really good, LC. ^____________^

[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE


You see into the deepest part of me ---

beyond the fog I hide behind.

You cast your light upon the shadows

that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.

You ease the pain when I am hurting,

and morbid visions from my past

pierce into the realm of Reason

as though I danced on blades of glass.

You grant me strength when I have fallen

and, once again, I've lost my way.

You take my hand in Yours and lead me

into the promise of a brand new day.

You bring order to all my chaos,

yet set my well-laid plans awry.

You place me on a firm foundation ---

then give me wings so I can fly.

You sand away my roughened edges

and polish all the dullest parts

until I stand before Your presence...

a newly-sculpted work of art.

You see into the heart within me,

right through my motives and selfish will.

And yet, in spite of all You see

You say You love me even still.


~by D.M.~

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Postby Rachel » Wed Dec 29, 2004 4:26 pm

Nice poem yo.
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