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haha okay, i know you're all wondering why hasn't rachel posted more of that excellent poetry of hers? well i've been wondering that myself too. so rather than resurrect seasons i've decided to make this here thread for you all to enjoy. so without further ado, i give you the poetry of rachel!!! i think this is one of my better ones anyways. here we go.

numb yourself

turn the radio on and
let the music was over you
covering the scars that
line your bloody wrists
try to numb yourself
as Stairway plays
and your mother screams
no one hears your cries
and they ignore your tears
the cresscendo builds
and your heart atrophys
try to numb yourself
the music fades away and
you slowly falls to the floor
you couldn't numb yourself
Bob Dylan wails


so there ya have it. i hope y'all enjoyed it.

gracias dear icky!

sounds sad.

Wow! I have to repeat what your brother said.

This is very good. I can hear this sung with a really hard rock beat in the background, or maybe something Bob Dylanny. ~_^

Anyways, I really did like this one very much. You're such a talent. ^___^

More, I say more, please.

thanks you guys well i have to go to bed now. i'll post another one tomorrow

sheherazade wrote:sounds sad.

Hers often are. If you like, here is a link to her old thread.

here

ok so here is one that i wrote not too long ago. i think it's pretty sad, but then again i think most of my stuff is pretty sad. anyways here goes and i hope that y'all enjoy it.

asylum

pain echoes off of the bare walls
drowning out your silent plea
paint the floor with your fears
hide away from the shadows
that crawl across your mind
a dark night filters through
the iron barred windows
the voice inside your head
has become your only friend
red drips red from your wrists
onto the shackles chained around your feet
holding you in the corner of your cell
you're tto scared to beak free
safely inside your comfort zone
locked inside the prison you built
to escape what you can't face
the last feather falls from your wings
leaving you all alone

A little dark, but really well done.

ok so i don't have a poem to post this time, but i promise next time you will be glad that you waited. haha. probably not. i'm going to try my hand at writing a love song. hahahaha! yeah. if y'all hate it i won't blame ya.

I'm sure it'll be good. I'll be looking forward to reading the song. Good luck and God bless.

When's the next poem going to be?

Hey Rachel, I had to log back in when I read "Asylum." Woohoo, that was a good one!:rock: It really captured the essence and mood. Keep writing them.

Thanks you guys...uhh...gals...hehe. I'm not sure when I'll post another poem. I'm in the process (process yeah right) of writing another one right now so I should post it soon. It might be a while though because I have to work on my term theme for english. Later peeps! Holla! Hehe.