The Bonds of Friendship.

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The Bonds of Friendship.

Postby Kiba-kun » Tue Oct 11, 2005 2:57 pm

Alright this isn't my first attempt at a poem but this one is special to me so here goes. and i would like to see what you think of it to.



Friendship is the simplest thing.
It's as common as a doorbell's ring.
But just like life, it has it's ups and downs.
It can bring forth a sensation that you will drown.
Most will say, "This is a lie."
But I assure you, friendship does die.
A friendship is made by a simple meeting.
And with the flow of time you will often be greeting.
The more you meet the more you know.
And in time your friendship will grow.
As you fridendship grows, you'll be expected to know.
All the things that your friend has to show.
At this time, if you make a mistake,
The bonds you formed will beging to quake.
The jewel of friendship, which you have held dear,
Soon begins to crack, which leads you to shed tears.
As time flows on, the jewel will break.
Leaving behind shards in memories' wake.
The memories left behind are broken and torn.
It's as if you've just been given a thorn.
If you try to mend it, the shards won't fit.
At this time you'll feel like a twit.
The friendship you've had is truly gone .
But fret not, as life goes on.
Time is like a river, it flows in one direction.
And later in time you shall feel a new affection.
FKA Mythmaster


Why must we be abandoned in times of need?
Do others not see when we yearn for their touch;
An insatiable hunger only they can feed.
Left alone with out their words – fallen into darkness.
Stumbling blindly without their light,
We fall and scream, knowing we've faced too much,
Knowing the only answer is flight.
Flight from the lives we once faced
And the joys and terrors others have brought.
Our time with them, a time of joy and life,
Wonder we all, was it for naught?
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Postby Silvanis » Tue Oct 11, 2005 4:41 pm

That's beautiful! Well written.
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Postby Kiba-kun » Tue Oct 11, 2005 8:08 pm

^^ thanks
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Why must we be abandoned in times of need?
Do others not see when we yearn for their touch;
An insatiable hunger only they can feed.
Left alone with out their words – fallen into darkness.
Stumbling blindly without their light,
We fall and scream, knowing we've faced too much,
Knowing the only answer is flight.
Flight from the lives we once faced
And the joys and terrors others have brought.
Our time with them, a time of joy and life,
Wonder we all, was it for naught?
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Postby faithfighter » Wed Oct 12, 2005 8:41 pm

its beautiful, very bitter sweet. sad but that only adds to its beauty, you are a natural my friend
[color="Green"][font="Verdana"]There is no one you can't love once you know their story-Mary Lou Lawnacki[/font][/color]
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Postby Kiba-kun » Wed Oct 12, 2005 8:44 pm

Thank you so much Zooky.
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Why must we be abandoned in times of need?
Do others not see when we yearn for their touch;
An insatiable hunger only they can feed.
Left alone with out their words – fallen into darkness.
Stumbling blindly without their light,
We fall and scream, knowing we've faced too much,
Knowing the only answer is flight.
Flight from the lives we once faced
And the joys and terrors others have brought.
Our time with them, a time of joy and life,
Wonder we all, was it for naught?
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